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Open Poetry #19

Hearts - from Poetry Workshop

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-02-26 09:16 AM

Hearts
(Triolet Attempt II)

Holding steady to hear my heart within
To feel the waterfall of love
Hearing drumbeats against the din
Holding steady to hear my heart within
Having you safely in reach therein
Knowing the peace of a mourning dove
Holding steady to hear my heart within
To feel the waterfall of love

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

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1 posted 2002-02-26 09:37 AM

very nice imagery....and it flows well indeed... nicely done my friend..

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

2 posted 2002-02-26 12:15 PM

Hmmmmm, the waterfall of love gives me chills,
and makes my heart rush.
Enjoyed the feel to this very much.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-02-26 01:00 PM

I like "the waterfall of love", that's a great line. . . made me see it as that washing of liquid. . .

well done. . .

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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2002-02-26 02:48 PM

Without knowing it, or perhaps you did, this piece wrote my heart and yes, when the rush comes, it is a waterfall of love, and being perfectly centered and still is the best way I can enjoy it. Now I bet you know I also took this just for my very own.

Karilea, wonderful choice for a triolet.

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

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Denise

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5 posted 2002-02-26 03:10 PM

Gorgeous, Karilea! Wonderful expression!

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