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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-26 07:54 AM



Special Treatment


you pressed
my patience
with irons
of anger
and wrinkled
my heart
in loneness
scorching something
meant forever
silk is
not made
for tears
it stains

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
1 posted 2002-02-26 08:04 AM


your way with words
is soft sharp
enjoyed the way
you said what you said

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
2 posted 2002-02-26 01:55 PM


Hmmm, don't know how this got so far away with so few comments, so, back up we go.........loved the way you made your point....

jimmy

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just out of reach
3 posted 2002-02-26 02:22 PM


Darn!! I wish I had written this!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-02-26 03:05 PM


"silk is
not made
for tears
it stains"




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Helen, this is soooooo very sad, I hope all is alright with you and now you have been wreathed in the blanket of true love that has washed all your tears away! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautifully heartaching! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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