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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-02-24 10:56 AM






Sisters of the Heart

You sistered my sun
Though I had one

While my sister
I’ve loved so long
Her thoughts and mine
Do not belong

You sistered me
By want of choice
In hold of hands
You gave me voice

There is no blood
Though bonds of tie
Unspoken knowing
In see of eye

A sister of selection
In mirrored reflection

You’ve held my heart
Taken a stand
And then in quiet
Took my hand

Do you, in quiet
Solitude
Hear my applause
In plentitude?

For I would
Forevermore be
A friend of you
Through Sisterly

Connected reflections
Causing introspection

Here’s the porch
Our rockers await
Sister’s face
At picket gate

Stories to share
In caring tell
A pick-me-up
For when we fell

Now a shawl
I give to thee
In spread of warming
Sisterly

A sister, mirrored,
None held, dearer.



Inspired by Laurence Binyon's "Magnets", circa 1923
and in appreciation for the lovely
Poetesses of Passions
all...who write with their heart in just the right place...


©Karilea Rilling Jungel
24 February 2002



© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
peaches73533
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1 posted 2002-02-24 11:01 AM


Karilea,
Beautiful as always.I would gladly love to have a sister such as you.Being as how all I have is brothers.LOL>
Peaches

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2 posted 2002-02-24 11:07 AM


Karilea

I would rock with you anyday...and do so on the porch here in my heart every day.  

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3 posted 2002-02-24 11:08 AM


There is no blood
Though bonds of tie
Unspoken knowing
In see of eye

A sister of selection
In mirrored reflection

You've held my heart
Taken a stand
And then in quiet
Took my hand
================================

yes...how many times have we seen our hearts reflected in another poetesses words...
Sisters of the Soul.
we warm in your words often sister sun

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (02-24-2002 11:08 AM).]

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4 posted 2002-02-24 12:49 PM


Kari darling sister of my heart OH MY this is so beautiful an amazing stunning example of spirit in form. You darling girl really do write with light. Absolutely awesome writing skills

This is exactly how I feel of my sisters of choice, and YOU darling heart are MY sister of choice. You can sit with me in the orchard anytime darling heart


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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5 posted 2002-02-24 12:58 PM


the bonds created through friendship and sisterly love.... nothing better....nothing needed quite so much
loved this smile for my day

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6 posted 2002-02-24 01:00 PM




(smiles) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words sing out to all the beautiful poetesses of Passions like yourself that always bring beauty and enchantment to us all! (kiss on cheek) This is outstanding, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-02-24 01:25 PM


Ahhh this is so lovely Karilea!  Sisters of the heart...right up there but not quite the same as a blood sister. But heart sisters are sooo special. I can picture my sister Nightshade and I, in Spirit Cove, sitting on a porch swing with  shawls wrapped around us, chatting away, with a wee nip sitting on the table beside us ...lol...oh dear I am starting to ramble.  Not a good sign!  And, I love this one so!  Thank you for the smiles today!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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8 posted 2002-02-24 01:29 PM


I've got a collections such sisters...smiling...gotta love this one! I wanna "sister" the whole world!!!! bwahahahaha.....

Love this.

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9 posted 2002-02-24 01:32 PM


Karilea,

I also have a few sisters here and I like them so much better than my four blood-related ones. LOL!  I very much enjoyed this and it's such a nice tribute to our lady poets here at Passions.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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10 posted 2002-02-24 03:18 PM


I saved today for special,
to hug a sister of my heart.
Sunday is the day we share,
Although we're far apart.

Today 5,000 hugs I send,
to let you know I care.
You're always inside my heart
and I take you everywhere.

What a lovely poem and I will treasure this one Karilea.

Live today like it was your last day on earth!
  ~* I don't know who said it but they were sure right *~



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11 posted 2002-02-24 03:39 PM


Here’s the porch
Our rockers await
Sister’s face
At picket gate

Sunshine - What a wonderful poem!! Sisters whether by blood or sisters of the heart, the bond of love is one and the same.
Enjoyed this thoroughly and it is going into my library.  Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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12 posted 2002-02-24 04:37 PM


Send me an application!!!  LOL     Great poem SEA~
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13 posted 2002-02-24 04:42 PM


Kari since you are my mum’s sister of heart does that make you my aunt? For if so I’m delighted to have such a talented and beautiful aunt. You write with such joy and feeling this is really excellent writing, I can see this writing is deep and heartfelt.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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14 posted 2002-02-24 06:09 PM


awww I love this Sunshine! It's so nice to have close girl friends that are like sisters to you! Great write
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15 posted 2002-02-24 07:17 PM


Another one for my favorites file. This is so beautiful! There is such a beautiful and huge sisterhood here, that no one should ever be without a sister to share secrets with, and Karilea, you are one of the most wonderful sisters anyone could ever have.
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16 posted 2002-02-24 10:17 PM


A bond of sisterhhood need not be a blood-bond to be a kindred one... Lovely, dear Sunshine...
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17 posted 2002-02-24 10:49 PM


What a heart warmer~~~Sunshine!
I loved the extension of your hands
through your words.

  

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18 posted 2002-02-25 03:32 PM


Wonderful piece and a wonderful tribute!

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