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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2002-02-25 06:06 AM


You are earth,
I am sky
above you,

your mountains
press their peaks
against my clouds.

I am your wind
when you breathe
your sigh breath.

You are my sensation
when your valley mists
and rivers flow.

My eyes are the sun,
your are reflection water
wearing my colors.

You are my firmness
growing in tree form,
to stone hardness.

I am your morning wet
when you waken,
I am glisten on your thighs.

We are love,
we are la terre et ciel,
we meld as one..

                
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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-02-25 06:39 AM


nicely done...nice picture too although a smile is more attractive on you *s

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-25-2002 06:42 AM).]

rwood
Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
2 posted 2002-02-25 07:41 AM


This blend is of Eden and its spiritual place. Both earth and sky..and all the elements in between. Wonderfully done.

Sincerely,
Regina

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2002-02-25 03:32 PM


rwood, thank you for the review of eden, through your eyes.

nt, thank you and I do smile on the inside often..

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