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Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2002-02-22 03:26 AM

Wind and Air

come wind and air
let my face feel your touch
fill my lungs
bringing life needed much

flyingfreedom to my soul
I will wait with eyes closed
for the sounds of the breeze
familiar friend of the leaves

Connie McDonald
copyright@2002
Feb 22, 2002
12:10am

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2002-02-22 07:19 AM

Elemental poem, one of the four,
I’ll try two of the others in a poem,
But as yours seems to be a walk in the woods
I’ll place mine in another, different location.
Perhaps a walk through a graveyard,
Reading the tombstones.

Enjoyed yours, hope mine will be as good.

Gloom

[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (02-22-2002 07:23 AM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-02-22 08:53 AM

very nicely done.... I enjoyed

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-02-22 08:57 AM

Very nice Connie, I LOVED this. hugs

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2002-02-22 09:03 AM

wind and air
they are two bodies
with wings

they fly in opposite

enjoyed this much Z

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-02-22 10:55 AM

Oh gosh, beautiful words about wind and air. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-02-22 10:56 AM

Zinsser - nice write of the wind and air...

BC

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

7 posted 2002-02-22 11:12 AM

connie...this is good...really good...helen

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

8 posted 2002-02-22 11:21 AM

very humble thanks.......

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-02-22 06:10 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo beautifully soothing, sweet friend, just envisioning feeling the wind mad eme feel a sense of peace and comfort! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2002-02-22 06:14 PM

Zinsser,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

11 posted 2002-02-24 04:05 AM

I like this very much. It reads like a prayer. Very good.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

12 posted 2002-02-24 04:11 AM

Zinsser,
elementarily good.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

13 posted 2002-02-24 08:54 AM

Very nicely done.Think this is onee for my library.
Peaches

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

14 posted 2002-02-24 10:18 AM

Thanks everyone.... really : )

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