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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-02-21 10:19 PM


Friendship


Friend this poem is written just for you
Reliable and trusty honest and true
In spite of storms that darken the night
Even though the wind blinds your sight
Never do you turn your back on me
Denying any accusations defending me
Saying the words I know as true
Holding my hand when I need you
I see you and my troubles fly away
Please my friend hear the words I say

I love you my friend and I also thank you
For being a friend who’s loving and true

Marsha

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-21 10:30 PM




YAY!!! This is soooooooo lovely, sweet friend, you are a wonderful friend to us all and we all love you so very much, you are sunshine and joy to us all! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shinbe upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-21 10:34 PM


Beautiful Marsha!  And, I love the pic of the adorable children!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

jennirey
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3 posted 2002-02-21 10:37 PM


I always Loved Holly Hobby. Hugs and Thank you, Friend..

Jen

Treasure every moment that you have!
Yesterday is history.
Tomorrow is mystery.
Today is a gift.
That's why it's called the present!!

Startime
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4 posted 2002-02-21 10:39 PM


*sigh* oh gosh, Marsha....you wrote this so well that tears gathered in my eyes...I love the way you did this beautiful poem...You put such loving heart into it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2002-02-21 10:44 PM


Marsha, darling girl. Again, I commend you on writing such a lovely creation. And you know, of course, I will be your friend, forever.

Forever I will be your friend
Rid  you of pain I'll suffer when
I see you need a helping hand
Everlasting to help you stand
Never will you just be alone
Distress will never make you moan
So when you feel you're needing me
Helping you to be ever free
In day; in night; I'll come to thee
Please take my friendship it is free.

I love everything you write, darling, Mushy!
I love your work! And, I love you.

((Marsha))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2002-02-21 11:26 PM


Marsha - this is lovely, like you. You have such compassion and it shows in this write. This is to be cherished by the one you wrote it for, or for all...

BC

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7 posted 2002-02-22 10:35 AM


Marsha sweets, this is a wonderful tribute.
"I see you and my troubles fly away'
This is lovely, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Aimster
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8 posted 2002-02-22 11:20 AM


Marsha,

This is such a beautiful piece
of writing my dear sis, but it hardly
does justice to the love you have inside
of your heart! you have such a beautiful
soul and im so honored that you wrote
this for me. you have the heart of an
angel and the soul of a true sister. i
love you always.

your little sis,
amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-02-22 11:27 AM


Mushy,
Lovely,

RosePetal
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10 posted 2002-02-22 02:08 PM


Mushy,

You are a good friend to us all! Wonderful acrostic dear girl.
(hugs)

Charisma
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11 posted 2002-02-22 03:17 PM


What a precious gift is friendship and you captured it very well....awesome piece.

(((hugs))
Charisma

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12 posted 2002-02-23 04:18 PM


Marsha - Such a nice write.  Well done.

Dave

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13 posted 2002-02-26 10:39 PM


SweetMarshaLove~
Not only is this a well penned acrostic ...
it's such a beautiful render from a heart so tender~

You know I love it ... just as I love YOU~

A gorgeous presentation sweet friend~

You are the bestest sweetie~
Love you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Tracey
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14 posted 2002-02-26 10:58 PM


You’ve captured the essence of friendship here Marsha. There is nothing in the world more dear than true friends.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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15 posted 2002-02-27 01:03 AM


What an adorable presentation in its entirety.

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein


peaches73533
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16 posted 2002-02-27 01:21 AM


Holly Hobby was one of my favorites growing up.I can remember having my room done all in Holly Hobby.Thanks for the beautiful words and the wonderful memories.
peaches

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