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Heart Deceived
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Heart Deceived |
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crazy4u Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 67 |
How can you silence a conscience full of regrets? For in my dreams would I have ever imagined shattering my heart for you. It surely is strange how you managed to captivate me and drove me to sheer idleness for I can do nothing but sit and look at the past and how blissful you made me. How happy I was just having you in my life. How I felt so in love or so blinded by you that I sincerely thought that you felt the same. For when we spoke we connected we were joined in words we were one in thought. Even though I never believed in soul mates you managed to make a believer of me.. Why? Why? Couldn’t I have been right. Why didn’t you prove me right? Instead you turned your back on me you completely turned yourself into a stranger and turned me into one as well. Why did u do this to me? Why did u speak to me if you never even had the intention of keeping a friendship? Why were u so nice and why did you always say the right things? I hope you know that you have left a void in me, that I miss you even though you proved me wrong in so many ways and that I’m still crying the fact that you are gone. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Crazy4U~ Hard lesson to learn ... sometimes you just have to cut your losses and move on~ Nicely emoted~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Don't like being deceived and never will...but I like the thought that someday it will truly be a heart devoted...James |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
A nugget of wisdom once shared with me is this: "Sometimes it is not about you...sometimes it is about the other person." Meaning: Maybe there wasn't a thing wrong with who you are or what you did, how hard you tried, how much you loved...the other person made a choice and it may have been the wrong one, someday they may live to regret it. We can't control some things in life, we can only do and be the best we can.  -Kat |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
why is a small word connotating many things should you really ask ~*~ I enjoyed your piece Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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crazy4u Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 67 |
Thank you all for your comments But i have to go with James on this one I can hardly wait for my "heart devoted" xoxo |
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butterflykiss989 Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 52 |
Wow I can completely relate to you on this... your words remind of the same sadness and the same question I ask on those rainy days where all you can do is think... good job |
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