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He Grounds Me
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He Grounds Me |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Whisper saneness in my ear When ancient deamons reappear Speak so softly in the night So tortured memories fade from sight Keep me steady, keep me here While ghosts cry out my secret fears Take me with you to the light A beacon heart that holds me tight Please...please, be here in a year When ancient deamons disappear |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I could've written this. But I didn't, you did. And you expressed it so well! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) So very sad and heartwrenching, sweet friend, I hope now you have found true happiness and the Light has chased all your demons away and left your heart at peace! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my heart is always with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!    May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I think every heart cries out for that kind of security and comfort, here is hoping that you never lose it! ((hug)) |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"He Grounds Me" You could not have picked a better title for this wonderful poem amusemi. floria Floria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
This is very beautiful. Thanks for sharing.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
amusemi - I came by and read this beauty. Well said... BC |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Thankyou all for reading and commenting, I would thank each of youpersonally, but I have too many chores and can't play 'til later.... Thankyou...thankyou!!! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is wonderfull.... I love it... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Well done! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
amusmi, those are wishes many of us have...you express them with class  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah..those deamons... nicely done, nicely said... I do hope you have found the comfort to ease their hauntings. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done! I love it! I will be there dear when the demons disappear fearless together Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Amusemi, I, too, can relate to this one. Goodness, you said it better then I ever could! Excellent write! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A toast to your hopeful new day. Enjoyed |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Amusemi, this is so beautifully written and so true. Security is a very important aspect of love. I have to print this out and show it to my husband because he makes me feel so safe. I just loved this!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
different than what I was expecting. . . which should teach me to not expect. . .  well done my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
I really like this poem. I keep looking for that security, and it seems as though I might have found it. I just hope it doesn't go away. "What makes letting go hard isn't losing what you had, but losing the dream of what could have been." |
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