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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-02-19 10:15 AM



“WHEN I WAS”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I’ve experienced many
events in life,
some good, and some bad,
but the best I
ever knew, is when
I was loving you…
~~~~



© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2002-02-19 10:59 AM


Bill, its good to know men go through these thoughts too. Not just women missing their old love.
LOL on the boots
Sandra

Ariana
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2 posted 2002-02-19 11:02 AM


BC
Glad to see that you have good memories.  Keep them in that special place in your heart.  They will keep you warm on cold days.

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with you
3 posted 2002-02-19 11:03 AM


oh goodness.....I am keeping this one....
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-02-19 11:08 AM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words always touch my heart so deeply, just as I know as you will forvee rmake her happy! (big hugggsssss) Maybe someday I will get to meet the girl I love and find this happiness I have never felt before! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have suh a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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5 posted 2002-02-19 12:03 PM


*sigh* How perfectly wonderful this poem is...You love flows gently through each word...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-02-19 01:37 PM


Bill, you know how I love these short, sweet and to the point ones!!  Well...this is my new favourite!!  AND...I'm keeping it!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

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just out of reach
7 posted 2002-02-19 02:11 PM


Bill - oh, I love this one. Straight from the heart to the hearts of others. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

walker
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8 posted 2002-02-19 07:20 PM


Love the honesty, yes when we love we are better people
strbbux
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9 posted 2002-02-19 08:50 PM


Now Bill.....this short poem says it all. really wonderful how you can do that in a few words. honest and loving words. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

vandana
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10 posted 2002-02-20 10:20 AM


enjoyed
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2002-02-20 10:29 AM


Bill,
Good one, enjoyed

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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
12 posted 2002-02-20 11:13 AM


Bill~

there is nothing better....this is just a beautiful, simple calling of love....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

amusemi
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A State of Disarray
13 posted 2002-02-20 06:37 PM


Worthy of a bump!!  Short, sweet and soo romantic, Bill. You are a marvel!!
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