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Into The Mist |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“INTO THE MIST” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Silhouettes paint shadows just like pantomimes… Reminds me of subtle, been there many times… Words of yours heard, transparent as before… Always changing texture, when I would adore… Tired my heart is, listening to all this… Deceiving all you know, all I wanted, a kiss… Gone into the mist now, not to return, had enough… This time you lose, I called your bluff… ~~~~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh gosh..this touched the heart....so little to ask for...so little received...My heart goes out to you, Bill, for I know well what it is like to be deceived....**big big hugs**  HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY, MY FRIEND Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ouch...me doest detest a bit of a bite at the end of this one...BC, thought prevoking piece you have here  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Ah Bill...all you wanted was a kiss? You can have lots of kisses today! HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!! ~Smiles and hugs, Nancy~ *going to get my chap stick...be back later*  ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Bill- Wow...such sadness in this piece. You've expressed it well. Happy Valentine's Day to you. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to your tears and I pray with all my heart you will forever be kissed by the woman of your dreams and never be deceived ever again! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!    May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sounds pretty decisive, BCI... Nicely written.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ah hah!! Thank you very much! Some people don't know a good thing when they've got it!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very nicely done, Bill.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, I once wrote a piece called into the woods but it wasn't anywhere near as good as this. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
as always a heart touching gem. Beautiful penned. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Geez, Bill, a kiss is the least we should get, yes? I understand this poem, too well. Sandra |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A sensuously sad poem....and well done... |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
I can tell what happened from your poem, (i think) sounds like you care for her, never stop caring, great poem... strong feeling much love. Hayden My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is sooooooo incredibly amazing I can’t tell you how amazingly good this is, it’s brilliant just as you are. So full of meaning here you write deep and profound thoughts I think Do you know you are amazingly talented? Of course you don’t but you are indeed. Truly outstanding writing and I love it love it love it. I know this feeling well, absolutely fantastic writing And by the way I LOVE IT and you darling boy are superb    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (02-20-2002 05:25 PM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Bill,,,,I love that last line..great. floria Floria |
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