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Fee
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-19 03:28 AM


You need to tell me
what is inside your heart
I know that your scared
and that is the hardest part

Thoughts and emotions
just won't go away
you can not pretend
that everything is ok

We have taken a chance
and come so far
trusted each other
with the affairs of our hearts

I know your confused
from what you feel
but Babe this friendship
of ours is so real

So tell me now
straight from the heart
your fears and emotions
before they tear you apart

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

© Copyright 2002 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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1 posted 2002-02-19 07:05 AM


You've expressed the want and need for communcation powerfully Fee, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Archiveghost
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since 2002-02-09
Posts 16

2 posted 2002-02-20 07:27 PM


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3 posted 2002-02-20 07:53 PM




(sigh) Oh Fiona, I hope it all works out for you, this is so sad but touching! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautifuol heart, sweet Fiona, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2002-02-20 08:18 PM


Fee - nice write and moving. Hope he tells of his heart...

BC

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2002-02-20 09:11 PM


Hello Fee

Communication is the key to any relationship and so very important.  I hope he opens up his heart to you so you can see inside.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Fee
Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia
6 posted 2002-02-21 04:17 AM


Thanks everyone,

He has opened his heart, its the things that he wants to say but doesn't want to for the realisation of the truth.

And sometimes the truth hurts, not necessarily us, but others around us.

Hugs to you all, Your support is so sweet.

Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

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