Discovering Flesh ... for the challenge

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EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2002-02-14 06:03 AM

Discovering Flesh

It took just a smile
    and a hint of lace
        The spark was set
            and we began the chase

Passions flared
    through thoughts in time
        And the flames they burned
            fuelled with rhyme

Breathless desire swelled
    and souls did mesh
        As we found ourselves
            discovering flesh

There was no choice
    but let passion begin
        For that scorching touch
            brought forbidden sin

Lover’s dreams now smoulder
    with rapture fulfilled
        and the eyes they glow
            Their souls revealed

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-02-14 06:56 AM

Eagleone,
you have discovered magic here. The challenge is?
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2002-02-14 09:32 AM

Mmmm...i like this one alot Eddie..nicely done..

~Victoria~

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

3 posted 2002-02-14 11:48 AM

and what a discovery...I have made a wonderful one of my own in finding this beautiful poem.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 2002-02-14 11:58 AM

Smiles...with a title like that, who could pass this one up

~ Ruth
www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2002-02-14 03:39 PM

Eddie-
  I'm liking this muchly.
  Very sensually penned.
  Happy Valentine's Day!
  Hugs,
  ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-02-14 03:43 PM

Magic, AND warmth...

Where HAVE you been!?

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

7 posted 2002-02-14 05:41 PM

Eddie, this is fantastic. I love.....

Lover’s dreams now smoulder
    with rapture fulfilled
        and the eyes they glow
            Their souls revealed

very sensual and beautiful.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-02-14 11:21 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always light up these pages! (big hugggssssss) I LOVE IT!!! May you forever be touched by true loves caress, sweet friend, HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eddie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

9 posted 2002-02-15 05:01 PM

Love it when you write like this.....did I already say that I love it?

well..... I love it!!

Charisma

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

10 posted 2002-02-15 05:10 PM

*sigh* oh yes...sensual...from the heart of a romantic...I love it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

11 posted 2002-02-15 08:05 PM

oh yes...you romantic soul...

i'm still liking this...great job discovering flesh....

hugs, g

and for kethry..here is the challenge: /pip/Forum7/HTML/000416.html

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"it may be absurd..but dont be naive..even heros have the right to bleed" john ondrosic?

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

12 posted 2002-02-16 01:49 AM

I thank you all for your time and your comment, both are much appreciated, take care!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

13 posted 2002-02-16 03:24 PM

Hello Eddie

Your words almost ignited the page, so filled with passion and sensuality - so
beautifully written and very much enjoyed.

Take care......Sue

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

14 posted 2002-02-16 03:59 PM

Thanks Sue, glad you enjoyed!

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

15 posted 2002-02-20 12:21 PM

Whew!!!! Can we open a window in here? Wow Eddie!!

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

16 posted 2002-02-20 04:24 AM

Paula ~ well i guess if you must!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

17 posted 2002-02-20 07:17 AM

It's certainly hard to read while covering my eyes

you know....being an

and all...lol Loved this poem my fine poetic friend...certainly made your quill melt today!!! Awesome write!!

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

18 posted 2002-02-21 05:45 AM

So good to have you stop by dear friend, thank you, and take care!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

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