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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-02-16 10:16 PM

THAT SMILE
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/16/02

The first day I met you
That smile you wore on your face
Made me feel so happy knowing your love was true
Your sunshine helped me rejuvenate

That smile you have is like a bouquet
Your sighs are like babys breath
The way you dance and sway under skies of parfet
Your tawny hair shimmers and brings my heart to rest

Knowing you wear that smile
Everyday feels like Mardi Gras
Just the thought of being with you for every while
Brings heaven to my heart, my sweet madonna

That smile you wear
Always makes me fall in love all over again
That smile you wear
Makes me want to love you again and again

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-16-2002 10:17 PM).]

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2002-02-16 10:27 PM

lovely words noah dear...as always...

~Vic..hugss

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

2 posted 2002-02-16 10:41 PM

Very Sweet, Noah! You are a very kind and gentle poet.

Cor

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-02-16 11:21 PM

Yes a smile can say a lot...James

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

4 posted 2002-02-17 12:03 PM

Awesome, Noah, just awesome! Loved this

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2002-02-17 01:28 AM

you mean this smile

hehhee

I've read all of your candy heart poems so far and they are all irresistibly good!

rebekah33
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 140
MD/NJ

6 posted 2002-02-17 02:33 PM

*That smile you wear
Always makes me fall in love all over again
That smile you wear
Makes me want to love you again and again*

Sooooo cute!!!! Really?! Where can i find a guy like you? Thanks for the adoreable poem!
-R.

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

HelmutB
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 964
Canada

7 posted 2002-02-17 05:08 PM

Well done Noah

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2002-02-17 05:14 PM

Very romantic and beautiful, Noah...
Its funny how a smile can haunt you. I hope that you give this poem to the love of your life, and that she loves it too!

hugggsssss!!!!!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (02-17-2002 05:15 PM).]

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

9 posted 2002-02-17 06:05 PM

So sweet Noah!

I never realised I could still love until I met him...

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2002-02-17 06:17 PM

Hi Noah, I bet she is smiling a lot for you.
And thanks for digging out some of my old poems. Italy would be fun, wouldn't it?
Sandra

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