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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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When longing nudges my sense of reality from its framework, how boundless the ocean. The sea would not let me drown, except as a lover might. © 2002 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (02-25-2002 09:58 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A good way to end my reading this night...my eyes are weary, now my heart is full... thank you Corinne... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your heart forever drown into ecstacy and happiness and may you swim in a lagoon of eternal promise forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corinne I love the way you wrote this, simple-profound. |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
I love this. I could write a book: but I can't. If understood, then the compliment is taken well... Gorgeous, Corinne... and brushes a shadowed part of me that at first appeared to have drowned, itself, in some deep fairytale sleep of a hundred years -- and lost in its own dreams, could not feel the touch of all the real around it, and so, while subsisting, was quite mistaken for something vanished or not altogehter alive -- but was stirred, instead, here, at the simple (but, oh, how not) strike of words: rolled over moaning and opened its eyes to my own... ~smile~ and there a page to the book is, without my meaning to... but as open and full as wanted. I love this. [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Cor (02-26-2002 01:36 AM).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sunshine - thank you, glad you liked! Thank you, Noah, you are always so kind. Martie - thanks for saying so. I was afraid that it was too succint! ElizbethCor - how wonderful that you found your own insights in this, I am honored. And write that book!!! I'll be the first to read it! Corinne |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
but. . . would we want to be rescued??  this speaks so much. . . I'm not sure that I can tell it all to you. . . but, you already know it. . . well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Don't think it could have been said any more beautifully, Corinne...(bowing here). jwesley |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, Well done, enjoyed |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fabulous expression, Corinne! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
I'm afraid it would. But that's just the loss man in me. Keep this. Bob |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Faith will make it so... This is wonderful, Corinne.. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Sven, JWesley, Sey, Denise and Nan! Bob, come now, this isn't the Bob I know! thank you, Corinne |
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