(post) evening stream of thought.

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haydenjames
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since 2002-02-14

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Antigua & Barbuda

0 posted 2002-02-14 09:19 PM

evening stream of thought.

the sun sinks quietly beneath the horizon.
flowers shout with the fading touch of grace.
stars begin to appear as if looking for the sun.
the touch of darkened air surreal to taste.

fingers of life's cycle must continue to clench.
enclosing the answers to questions, conjecture it flows.
eyes wide open as if my insides were in wench.
yet a mellow is reaped from the smell etched in my nose.

it's of lilies white, with hints of green and yellow.
relinquishing the ebb of irksome daylight's deeds.
resuming the joint purpose of how it - life - seems to go.
another night of desires, imaginings, aspirations and needs.

©2002 hayden a. james

Any suggestions/comments?

for more of my poems go to: www.thehayden.org

[This message has been edited by haydenjames (02-14-2002 09:37 PM).]

Sunshine

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1 posted 2002-02-14 09:24 PM

quote:
Any questions/comments?

Yes! Welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful start! I hope you look around, find a place to put up your feet, lean back and relax, and overall enjoy yourself! Please check your E-mail for a special Greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-02-14 09:32 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

Wonderful First Post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work!
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

~Love transcends time and space~

haydenjames
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since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

3 posted 2002-02-14 09:35 PM

Awww... thanks! I posted on anthor large poetry web site today and they were so rude! Thanks for the warm welcome. Hope to be here for a loooong time.

I'm still novice and want to learn a lot here.

Thanks,
Hayden

P.S. Ok... now you can tear me apart cause I know i'm way below par hehe.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-02-14 09:41 PM

Your writing is great....now take to time to read and reply to other poets here.
Enjoy yourself...we're one big happy family!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~

Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13

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5 posted 2002-02-14 10:35 PM

Welcome.... and may I add now.... YOU ARE NOT BELOW PAR.... I loved your imagery. I just joined yesterday at the behest of a friend.... and I have been greeted with nothing but kindness and respect..... Write on and read on.... we each post but read too... that's what this site is all about.

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

vlraynes
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6 posted 2002-02-15 01:26 AM

hayden-
Wonderful first post...very much enjoyed.
Welcome to Passions!
I hope to see lots more poetry from you.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

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7 posted 2002-02-15 01:42 AM

Just want to say...enjoyed your poem very much. Wonderful start. Look forward to more.

***Ivy Rose

haydenjames
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Antigua & Barbuda

8 posted 2002-02-15 09:08 AM

thanks i will be making comment on others' poetry 4 sure.

Midnitesun

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9 posted 2002-02-15 10:56 PM

Hayden, welcome to Passions.

I enjoyed your imagery, and could almost smell the scent of lilies, and I liked the way you had the stars searching for the sun.
My guess is you will enjoy posting here.

Poet deVine

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10 posted 2002-02-15 11:16 PM

Beautiful!!! Welcome to our humble home. I look forward to reading more from you. Please look around, there is so much here to see and enjoy!

doreen peri
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11 posted 2002-02-16 12:01 PM

you reflect on life's atmosphere with verse that contains wonderful images and the spirit of a true poet!

i enjoyed this very much!

RosePetal

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12 posted 2002-02-16 12:22 PM

Welcome to our humble home! I have the feeling you will absolutely love it here!

Victoria

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13 posted 2002-02-16 12:27 PM

Welcome to Passions...I hope you enjoy your stay..and i enjoyed your words very much

~Vic

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will never betray."
— Confucius

Mistletoe Angel

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14 posted 2002-02-16 07:42 PM

BRAVO!!! WOW, THIS IS WONDERFUL, SWEET FRIEND, THIS IS A FABULOUS FIRST POST!!! I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet James, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big huggsssssss) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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