Who, dude, you're in a creative writing class too?? Cool. Well, I believe pantoum is written in iambic pentameter, that's what I was referring to. But then, I didn't spend too much time learning about it, concentrating more on being safe and staying with the good ole tried and tested sonnet.
But no, apart for the form thing, I liked this poem. It was cool.
2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2