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gemjop
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0 posted 09-19-2003 10:26 AM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for gemjop

She had been thinking
that morning, she said
of how well
I had coped

Those words
have since broken
the silence

Moisture upon cracked lines
of suffered skin

Your reign rejuvinated

Watching fingers bend
the way
flesh rolls over joints
and back again

I never forgot
your shape
the comfortable way
it became less
that you plagued me

How long before
next silence
dominates
where it should again?



Instant karma's gonna get you.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 09-19-2003 10:49 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


I know
that type
of silence...

Thank you, Gemma
Allysa
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2 posted 09-19-2003 03:09 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

i don't know what to say, gem.  this is great, you caught my brain in a butterfly net.
Wind
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3 posted 09-20-2003 09:30 AM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

its like liquid gem. this flows...

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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4 posted 09-20-2003 11:16 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

excellent. a portrait of depth and layered meaning...

I love this.
Aenimal
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5 posted 09-21-2003 12:09 AM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

amazing hurt gem..on a brighter note..guess who was just in town..kelly
gemjop
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6 posted 09-21-2003 08:04 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

thanks guys. sorry i'm back to moaning n being mardy again. bad week. bad summer.

i'm seeing him on the 20th of december.

in warbling annoyiong mariah carey voice, "aaalllll i want for christmassssssssss is kellllyyyyyy"

I hereby pronounce myself the BIGGEST GEEK EVER.
and i'm nearly 21. i need to get a life.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Yu Lan
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7 posted 09-24-2003 10:45 PM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

"Watching fingers bend
the way
flesh rolls over joints
and back again"

... it's those little things. Really special Gem

I haven't read any of your poems before - I don't come here often enough obviously!! Because look what I've been missing out on..

Bless your cotten sockies, you poetic maniacs. ^_^

Love - Lynne

Aenimal
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8 posted 09-25-2003 12:25 AM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Gem you're definitely the biggest geek ever and i've been told you suck at checkers..lol
Patricia
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9 posted 09-25-2003 06:12 AM       View Profile for Patricia   Email Patricia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patricia

Holding this one in my mind...very well written, holding much meaning for me.

Patricia
Allysa
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10 posted 09-26-2003 02:28 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

Gem, I felt like coming back and telling you that there hasn't been a day that this has been up where I haven't come and read it and reread it...

It's magnetizing.
 
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