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Wind
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0 posted 08-26-2003 04:41 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Wind


I enjoy
every moment
that you suffer-
Useless ashes
twist and turn
while nothing matters

sight is not possible
when left in the shadows

sometimes
I take
the word bleed
and make it mine

I wonder were the laughter goes
when nobody’s here to hear it?

And I’m home again
right where you left me
head banging truth
that word still tastes bitter

Oh and they’ll save you now
there’s the ‘L’ word again
you want to take it back?

I can hear them laughing now…

flash back:
I cry
you stand

and nobody cares anymore

“Not I” said the dog
“Not I” said the cat
“Not I” said the pig

I do it by myself
And leave not a crumb for you



insanity is not a crime

[This message has been edited by Wind (08-28-2003 09:55 AM).]

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1 posted 08-26-2003 08:13 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Liz:

I cannot wait to read you when your twenty

sometimes
I take
the word bleed
and make it mine

priceless lines
xxoo
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2 posted 08-26-2003 08:21 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

"sometimes
I take
the word bleed
and make it mine"

Damn..

I'm so excited that you posted, too.. *giggle*

Awesome write, I'm saving it.
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3 posted 08-26-2003 08:50 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

Sue- thanks sweet. unless I've gone insane by then and they have me locked up- it's possible

Meg- you have no idea how funny it is to see you write the word 'giggle.' ha. haha

insanity is not a crime

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4 posted 08-26-2003 11:09 PM       View Profile for timothysangel1973   Email timothysangel1973   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit timothysangel1973's Home Page   View IP for timothysangel1973

"sight is not possible
when left in the shadows"

...wonderful thoughts Wind, I feel this way sometimes...


"I wonder were the laughter goes
when nobody’s here to hear it?"

...good question my poetic friend...


Beautiful write, very much enjoyed!
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Dont worry Liz when they lock you up at least you'll have me around to talk to grins..or will that thought turn you even more insane? grins
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6 posted 08-27-2003 04:20 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

TA- thanks, you are so sweet.

Raph- no, so far it hasn't gotten me yet. grins

insanity is not a crime

Aenimal
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7 posted 08-28-2003 01:52 AM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Liz yuo have to something about that eye problem of yours...and your greenish skin..are you eating okay?
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8 posted 08-28-2003 07:53 AM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

they will lock you up liz, no matter what, and me to, then we can finally meet within those padded walls! yep

quote:
twist and turn
while nothing maters




is that not suppossed to be matters?
ri

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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9 posted 08-28-2003 09:54 AM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

ah...I'm gonna hurt both of you

insanity is not a crime

[This message has been edited by Wind (08-28-2003 09:56 AM).]

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10 posted 08-28-2003 10:04 AM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

i just...love you.
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11 posted 08-28-2003 10:57 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Good God, all in the same mental ward?
will drive the doctors mad . . .
would be fun though
*smile*
yw
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12 posted 08-28-2003 01:05 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

That's the first time I've ever seen an angstfest married to a Spin 'n' Say.
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13 posted 08-28-2003 01:46 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

yeah..we drive them crazy...join the party

and um..what?

insanity is not a crime

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14 posted 08-28-2003 06:23 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

quote:

“Not I” said the dog
“Not I” said the cat
“Not I” said the pig



That reminds me of those old Spin 'n' Says. Or is it Speak 'n' Spin? Those ripcord-activated dial-wheels with fat arrows. If the arrow lands on the picture of a dog, a speaker says "The dog goes Bark bark, bark bark!" Or if it lands on a cow, "The cow goes Mooooooo!"

Nevermind. :/
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15 posted 08-28-2003 06:38 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

yes, my son has one, I keep it well hidden . . .
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16 posted 08-28-2003 11:29 PM       View Profile for brian sites   Email brian sites   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian sites

yes

I second what Sue said

when you are twenty

you will take our reading eyes

and make them bleed

wow
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17 posted 08-29-2003 08:56 AM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

see...now I know what you were saying...I was talking about the little red hen. you know..she askes her animal friends for help making bread and then they don't help her so she eats it all herself you know..oh thse toys used to facinate me...I used to pretend I was a DJ and scramble it up. The rooster goes gguuguggguguru

insanity is not a crime

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I used to take hold of the arrow and make it go really slow or really fast.
 
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