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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-08-14 12:23 PM

lingering moon
in morning sky
surrenders guard
to rising sun

i watch the change
as sleep dissolves
into consciousness

before the trees
give way to steel
before the earth
gives way to asphalt
before this peace
gives way to thoughts

in
there is perfection
between

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2003-08-14 06:39 PM

Beautiful absolutelY beautiful Sir Raph, the imagery is perfecto I could see it all happenig right there before my eyes.

m'friend.

mAREE.

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-08-15 03:04 AM

You've worded this perfectly, Raph.

Has your muse returned? Or are you just teasing me?

I have a secret for you, though.. Perhaps there is no muse..perhaps it's all inside of you already..

Keep on with this, I've missed it.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-08-15 09:13 PM

I stay up all night to witness that.

Then it just became a habit.

Hugs from another in betweener...

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-08-16 04:41 AM

Thanks Maree, its when i'm at my best..early morn before i'm able to speak or think

Perhaps Meg but i'm not gonna temp fate..for now i can write or attempt to

Thanks K hugs

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-08-16 10:44 PM

Ahh, now this I know too well . . .
the writing and the message
beautiful writing Raph and the
closing is beyond perfect
xxoo

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2003-08-18 06:32 PM

I am not disappointed, I'll leave pip to have a breakdown more often boyo.

seriously, I will.

bout time you got of your bleep bleep and wrote such perfection as this!

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2003-08-19 08:08 AM

Nice piece Raph..and it is in the in between the perfection that exists seems to show itself... you captured that well.

I enjoyed

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-08-19 02:21 PM

Thanks all if only i could find that state a little more during the night

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