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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space


0 posted 08-14-2003 12:23 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aenimal

lingering moon
in morning sky
surrenders guard
to rising sun

i watch the change
as sleep dissolves
into consciousness

before the trees
give way to steel
before the earth
gives way to asphalt
before this peace
gives way to thoughts

                           in
there is perfection
                           between


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Dark Angel
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1 posted 08-14-2003 06:39 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Beautiful absolutelY beautiful Sir Raph, the imagery is perfecto I could see it all happenig right there before my eyes.

m'friend.

mAREE.

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow


2 posted 08-15-2003 03:04 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

You've worded this perfectly, Raph.

Has your muse returned? Or are you just teasing me?

I have a secret for you, though.. Perhaps there is no muse..perhaps it's all inside of you already..

Keep on with this, I've missed it.
serenity blaze
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3 posted 08-15-2003 09:13 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I stay up all night to witness that.

Then it just became a habit.

Hugs from another in betweener...

Aenimal
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4 posted 08-16-2003 04:41 AM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Thanks Maree, its when i'm at my best..early morn before i'm able to speak or think

Perhaps Meg but i'm not gonna temp fate..for now i can write or attempt to

Thanks K hugs
littlewing
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5 posted 08-16-2003 10:44 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Ahh, now this I know too well . . .
the writing and the message
beautiful writing Raph and the
closing is beyond perfect
xxoo
gemjop
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6 posted 08-18-2003 06:32 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

I am not disappointed, I'll leave pip to have a breakdown more often boyo.



seriously, I will.

bout time you got of your bleep bleep and wrote such perfection as this!

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Cpat Hair
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7 posted 08-19-2003 08:08 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

Nice piece Raph..and it is in the in between the perfection that exists seems to show itself... you captured that well.

I enjoyed
Aenimal
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8 posted 08-19-2003 02:21 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Thanks all if only i could find that state a little more during the night
 
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