This read through like a sonnet. Without all the rhyming. But seriously, just like a sonnet otherwise... really, really well done here, Carly. I loved this.
It's a bit different for your style, but some of your same usual elements are ever-present, like your use of second-person, description of the third party and comparison between the second and third-person figures.... you just love this kind of poem, I know, because you love pointing your finger at the reader and giving them something to feel personally from the poem. You're good at that stuff, too.
Your imagery, geez, it's just Carly imagery. You have a mastery over words that makes your images almost impossible to concieve because of how unworldly they are. I very much admire the talent you employ in this piece....
As for the poem's meaning, well, talk to me on MSN. This one isn't too terribly deep, but I still like its meaning...
Very well done, sweetheart... great to see you still writing.
"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche