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Musicmaker1969
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25 posted 05-23-2006 03:12 AM       View Profile for Musicmaker1969   Email Musicmaker1969   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Musicmaker1969's Home Page   View IP for Musicmaker1969

Yes, I fully understand this longing.  I was once in love with a wonderful man, just like you describe here, but 3 months before we were to be married, he disappeared without a trace.  All he left behind in his apartments were the tokens of love I had given him.  I don't know if he is dead or alive, but I have never loved another like that since.  I got married and 1 1/2 years later, divorced.  I too long for this love again.  Very well done.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
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26 posted 01-06-2007 02:35 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Some time ago, I read this poem you wrote, and at that time it touched my heart, and here I am, once again, gravitating back to the pages of ago embracing these gems that I have enjoyed!
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27 posted 01-06-2007 05:14 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

This is one that surprises me, continuously.

I felt helpless writing it.

I feel helpless re-reading it.

I'm just sorry so many can relate.

wow. and I'm sorry...
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28 posted 10-31-2007 03:21 AM       View Profile for latearrival   Email latearrival   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latearrival

another boost, just because. "late"
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29 posted 10-31-2007 08:36 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

dang!!! (thanking Martyjo for boosting, for I had never read this.)
Karen,
    it resonates deeply
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30 posted 11-01-2007 03:06 AM       View Profile for latearrival   Email latearrival   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latearrival

Musicmaker1969, Today I found out  the reason my hairdreser has not been to her salon is because her daughter's 28 year old fiance just took his life.  His wake was this afternoon. They had bought a home together and moved in and were to be married in 2008.  I have no particulars, but what a horrible thing to do to the girl,her family, his family and all involved. I feel for you. A huge hurt that had to be. Sincerely , "late"
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31 posted 11-01-2007 03:08 AM       View Profile for latearrival   Email latearrival   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latearrival

Serenity, This poem of yours is so good and brings so much to others  that it has to be bumped every so often.  I am happy Kacy (midnightsun) had a chance to read it.

[This message has been edited by latearrival (11-01-2007 03:39 AM).]

 
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