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Just have to wait, Billy I can relate

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Kevin
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0 posted 02-12-2002 05:35 AM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

You canít hurry love
No, you just have to wait
So says Billy
In songs
That Iíve sampled of late
But the wait
In this state
Feels so anti-innate
At this rate
My true mate
Will be ten years too late
Is this fate?
Or bad luck
To be stuck
So alone
When I feel like Iím grown
With such passion yet shown
To a world that my friends
Say Is still mine to own

In a way
I agree
That itís me
Who must say
Where Iíll be
Some twenty
Years away
From today
Still this play
That I write
Has a plot
And a scene
But it still hasnít got
Someone Cast as the queen
And thereís only so much
That the touch
Of my pen
Can do for this act
Played over and again
Yes Iíve been
Here before
And Iím sore
From denial
A feeling that stays in oneís heart for a while
But smile
I still
When my will
Is the strongest
Through endless daylight
Though the night
Is the longest
And why do you ask
Do I mask
All this gray?
ĎCause auditions are open
At least for today

[This message has been edited by Kevin (02-12-2002 06:11 PM).]

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1 posted 02-12-2002 10:36 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


I'm liking this, but unfortunately, I don't think I'll get the song out of my head for the rest of the day!  
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2 posted 02-12-2002 12:30 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Me either on the song...geesh..LOL! It will be singing to me all day.

I loved this poem, and my thoughts are that you'll have plenty of time for all your passion. LOL! Don't worry. I got a lot more out of it, but that stood out to me. enjoyed.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 02-21-2002 03:29 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very smooth and poetic Kevin...James
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this made me smile...
 
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