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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-02-06 08:23 PM


(This is for my Guinevere...Joanna, who made 2000 posts today, and is the girl of my dreams!!!)

My Girl
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/2/01

My girl,
Oh, the way you shimmer
The way you spin and twirl
Oh, the way your hair waves and your eyes glimmer

My girl, my dream
Oh, the beauty of your words
Buzzes around e like a small cloud of honeybees
Oh, the sweetest words I have ever heard

My girl, my love
Oh, the sweetness of your smile
Your soft silky hair spreading the light from above
Watching you sway with the wind, out in my heavens meadow

My girl
My one true love is you
My girl
Your love sighs within my heart, sweet and true

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-06-2002 08:23 PM).]

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Hypnosis
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1 posted 2002-02-06 08:27 PM


Oh Noah this is just some great writing at its finest.  Your love is very strong i see.  I hope these feelings never change between you too.  Great job buddy, I just loved this!!!

    From your good friend
       Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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2 posted 2002-02-06 08:29 PM


Loving the poem..ur always so romantic *sigh* ..im in my anti romantic mood hehe....i found a new phrase i love but i aint gonna share it cuz some people would drop dead of a heart attack hehe byes!
Tifferz {}{}uG$

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3 posted 2002-02-06 08:55 PM


awwww for ME?!!! Darling, you are gushing with emotion, and it shows in your A++++
writing
Noah, I'm still sick with 101 fever..I need ya to come baby me til I am better.

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