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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-02-06 01:33 PM

A Wish Is A Dream

I wish on a star
that’s shining so bright
It hangs up so far
lighting velvet night

I wish on rainbows
with their pot of gold
Brilliant color flows
such sight to behold

I wish at midnight
during darkest hours
Magic I invite
questing of powers

A wish is a dream
flowing though my heart
A free running stream
with love to impart

Karen Torbiak 2002©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

1 posted 2002-02-06 01:36 PM

I always make wishes at Startime!

*smiles*

loved this!

~Tier

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

2 posted 2002-02-06 01:43 PM

Karen,I`m always dreaming or wishing I guess that is what we`re suppose to do.This was lovely.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-02-06 01:51 PM

Karen - A wish is a dream, and I have many of them to chase. Lovely write, as always.

BC

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-02-06 01:57 PM

aww Karen,

your poems are always so wonderfully worded and beautiful. I hope all your wishes are granted. (hugs)

RP

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2002-02-06 02:02 PM

I hope your wishes come true.

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

6 posted 2002-02-06 02:05 PM

Karen...this is so beautiful. All of your poems have that romantic touch. You could probably make housework sound romantic if you wrote a poem about it.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-02-06 02:21 PM

and you too shall find it again one day..
hugs
M

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

8 posted 2002-02-06 02:31 PM

Karen, this is so very beautiful. You are such a wonderful inspiration to me.

My wish is simply that your every wish comes true. And I just couldn't resist writing a poem about it.

Posted on a new thread is, "Wish! Dream! Fish! Scream! Eat ice cream! As we Love.
((Karen))

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2002-02-06 02:34 PM

Karen, this is just so pretty and optimistic, the flow, message and rhyme are perfect and it's going into my library

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2002-02-06 03:57 PM

StarTime~
A very pleasant read~
Your thoughts are twinkling~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-02-06 07:07 PM

Yes...a wish is a dream...how many wishes
have I experienced over the past half century?

How many more will I have?

You do this so well Karen...

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

12 posted 2002-02-06 07:16 PM

A wish is a dream
flowing though my heart
A free running stream
with love to impart

I think that a free running stream does not come close to describing the amount of love your heart carries dear friend!!!!HUGZ!!!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2002-02-06 08:58 PM

I wish on stars, and the moon, and on nothing at all..But you do it so poetically.
Sandra

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