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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2002-01-28 09:50 PM




Marge~

Look...it's a shower just for you
Hosted by Poet deVine
Come on in, and enjoy the fun
The friendship feels just fine

Here's some cake and ice cream
And Gummie Bears just for you
Now, it's time to open your presents
I'll bet there are quite a few

I searched and searched for the perfect gift
And came up with nothing...until
I decided to buy you whatever you want
BUT I'm sticking YOU with the 'Bill'!



~vraynes


Congratulations to you both!
I wish you all the happiness and love that you so deserve.

A HUGE thank you to Poet deVine for coming up with
the idea of a cyber shower, and for inviting me
to participate.What a great idea, and so sweet of
you to think of it.




"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (01-28-2002 09:51 PM).]

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Martie
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1 posted 2002-01-28 10:21 PM


Vicky--you're so cute...sticking her with Bill...very funny..and that's one bill I know she will be happy to pay..errrr, play?

Hugs to you and to Marge and the Bill!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2002-01-28 10:34 PM


*giggling* it is the perfect gift, indeed... maybe you better wrap him in a ribbon and bow...*giggling wickedly* I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

amigo
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 520
the earth school
3 posted 2002-01-29 10:48 AM


Vicky...this surely is a perfect gift....i think Marge may(?) like it too...

Hugs to you, and Marge and Bill too....

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
4 posted 2002-01-29 12:22 PM


well theres a 'bill' i dont think margie will mind!!  

very nice 'gift' from you tricks

CONGRATS TO MARGIE AND BILL!  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2002-01-29 05:37 PM


~Marge~


I wish for you and Bill to be
happy for all eternity.
Being the first of friends back when,
surprised I was to see you again.

Ever delightful, your words on here;
funny, solid, always sincere.
Can't give the gift of words to you
as you are the Queen, in this garden of blue.

But if ever deserved of happiness...
I gift you a life forever in bliss.


*I sort of stretched that last rhyme..*s

hugsss and best wishes always,
Maureen


"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-29-2002 05:38 PM).]

sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15
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6 posted 2002-01-29 05:55 PM


I'm sure she thinks its the perfect gift.Very nice!
cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
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Phoenix, Az
7 posted 2002-01-29 06:36 PM


Now this is a great idea!  Congrats Marge and Bill!
Great poem Vicky!
Love ya
Cindi

Balladeer
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8 posted 2002-01-29 11:34 PM


Wonderful, Vicky!!

BUMP! BUMP! BUMP!

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-01-30 02:57 PM


Vicky~
I am sitting here laughing my bazeeker off !

Who would have EVER thought I'd have written this one ...
LONG BEFORE I MET ~My Bill~
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Now I reckon it's that 'word-eating' time ! Yummy !

You crack me up, girlfriend !
Your sweet sentiment is only exceeding by your zaniness~

***Martie~ StarTime~ Amigo~ DG~ SodPossom~ Cindi~ and Balladeer~
Thank you all for your well-wishes~

Maureen/Wynter/MyFriend~
A *BIG HUG* around your neck for thta lovely  S T R E T C H  of thought~
We've been friends for a long time and I appreciate you !

PoetdeVine~
What a sweet gesture on your part~
I thank you sincerely~
*HUGS*
~*Marge & My Bill*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2002-01-30 03:02 PM



I think you found THE gift, Vicky! Hard for the rest of us to even come up with something so suitable!

Nan
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11 posted 2002-02-01 06:17 PM


So Marge and Bill are now betrothed
I'm happy for you both
You'd best start planning right away
For your grand wedding day

You'll need a giant cyber hall
Cause Passions poets all
Will surely want to wish you well
And ring your wedding bells...

The Best of Luck I wish for you
Sheer happiness for two

Love to you both
Nan



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