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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“SPEAKING HEART” by Bill Charles ~~~~ A heart can speak, but one must listen when it does, for it will whisper words of wisdom… Mine spoke when I first saw you, and if yours were listening, it would have heard mine say how very precious you are… ~~~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Good one, enjoyed |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Oh, this is just breathtaking! I love it! So tender and loving!!!! Well done!!! |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ We all need to take the time to listen, not just with ears, but with heart...lovely words here...  Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-18-2002 11:31 AM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* the heart speaks as do words that come from our heart this is true but how is one to know if they are real or fantasy...this poem made me think of the times I have listened to words and believed only to be told they were only words and not meant to convey anything. You touched me with this poem, dear man, you have a heart that speaks volumes and ears that listen closely, I think. Wisdom is clearly in these words...you amaze me with your ability to touch on so many areas of feelings. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
absolutely beautiful Bill...I someday hope someone will feel that way about me... *s M "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo wonderfully expressed, sweet friend, the heart always speaks, and I hope it speaks with such sincerity to your loving heart! (big hugggsssss) May her loving heart always speak to yours with honesty and love and faithfulness just as yours does and whisper with the beauty and joy of true love forever! We all love you so much, swee friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
nice tight poem with a quick get in and get out message that is amplified for being in that format. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill - A sweet and endearing piece. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is outstanding truly awesome. Sometimes a poem speaks volumes this does. You obviously listen to your heart, and I’m listening to this poem it sings to me YOU really are an outstanding writer. No one ever writes like you do, YOU are superb Is this good? Does the earth spin in space and time? Do birds sing? Does the sea always touch the shore? Yes? Then YES this is utterly utterly fabulous As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill....thank you for this one! Your heart really shows in this piece....you gentle man you!  I love it as all the women in Passions will. Of course we all think it was written for us alone! *But, sigh, only I know it as meant just for me!*~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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