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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-01-16 01:51 PM

“CLOSER TONIGHT”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Night shadows dim against the sky,
many thoughts of you, in my mind…
To cherish, to hold, to want,
not knowing, or having a clue…

Fantasies in which I pretend,
dreams I have, when I sleep…
Embracing tightly, as we touch,
loving you, into the deep…

Seeing you, a shadow of thought,
misty, cloudy, in my light…
You will not remember any other,
when I hold you, closer tonight…
~~~~

Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

1 posted 2002-01-16 01:58 PM

(sigh) Oh Bill you just write so beautifully I could read things like this in the mornings and fall asleep to them at nice.

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-01-16 02:00 PM

And dreams have been known to come true Bill. Lovely poem. floria

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-16 02:01 PM

(sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you always hold your true love close to your hearg every night and dream and see her in the morning forever with bliss! (big hugggsssss) Sooooooo beautiful sweet friend, we all love you so much! You are on my Duet list after Helen and Randy!!! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2002-01-16 02:29 PM

Seeing you, a shadow of thought,
misty, cloudy, in my light…
You will not remember any other,
when I hold you, closer tonight…

Bill, Wow, a lovely combination of words and thoughts. Enjoyed thoroughly. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2002-01-16 02:32 PM

*sigh* filled with such tender romance as dreams and fantasies are made of...I love the strong embrace your words send in the reading...absolutely magnificent..."closer tonight" perfection. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2002-01-16 03:14 PM

you certainly are the king of romance. No doubt about that! Keep these beautiful poems coming.

RP

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

7 posted 2002-01-16 05:43 PM

From one Romeo to another, you speak the words well here.

Flowing and heartfelt.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

8 posted 2002-01-16 08:42 PM

From fantasy to reality. We should all be so fortunate. Great write, Bill.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-01-16 08:52 PM

Wonderful Bill.....simply wonderful....
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2002-01-16 09:01 PM

Fantasies in which I pretend,
dreams I have, when I sleep…
Embracing tightly, as we touch,
loving you, into the deep…

Very lovely words bill..love it

~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

11 posted 2002-01-16 09:02 PM

Romantic, romantic, romantic.... and I just simply love it.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

12 posted 2002-01-16 09:04 PM

Bill darling boy YOUR use of line and imagery is utterly outstanding no one writes Romance the way you do. You are an utterly UTTERLY superb writer and this is amazing. I’m always impressed with your writing but this has stunned me. Wonderful writing truly wonderful

YOU are one in a million

So Bill darling boy just how close do you want to get?

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

poetryinmotion
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 61
mass

13 posted 2002-01-16 09:05 PM

oh Bill. this is a very romantic poem. i love romace and i know you do by reading your poems. great job Bill. wonderful poem. you are a great writer. i could read your poems all day. love Alice

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

14 posted 2002-01-17 10:33 AM

Bill, I think you and Startime are dreaming on the same wavelength. Pure romance.
Sandra

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

15 posted 2002-01-17 10:41 AM

Bill,very beautiful and so romantic.It gives a warm and loving feeling.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Canuckster
Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

16 posted 2002-01-17 10:45 AM

very touching and effective piece of writing Bill

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

17 posted 2002-01-17 10:46 AM

loved it

one of your best

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

18 posted 2002-01-17 11:24 AM

Bill,
I love reading your writes.They are always filled with such great emotion.May your dream come true.
Peaches

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