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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-01-14 05:20 PM

You are the early morning dew
As the day begins to dawn
You are the bud of a beautiful flower
That is still yet to be born

You are the sun's warming rays
It's beautiful beams caress my skin
You're much better than any prize
Or million dollar lottery win

You are the one who visits my dreams
And who makes my wishes all come true
You are the smile on my face
As I so fondly think of you

You are my guiding light at night
That shows me the right way
You are the words that come to mind
Whenever I struggle for something to say

So many things you are
So very special warm and true
A gift I certainly cherish
This gift of love I share with you

Suetang

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

1 posted 2002-01-14 05:22 PM

Simply wonderful.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-14 05:24 PM

(smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I just love all your gorgeous declarations of love from your heart! (sigh) May his love be a gift to last eternally and forever sparkle in mint condition with joy and faith! (kiss on cheek) Your words always make me smile, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2002-01-14 11:33 PM

My, my aren't we romantic? This was absolutely breathtaking dear lady, and I bet I know someone who is smiling from ear to ear too

~* CARPE' DIEM *~

thepoeticplumber
Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 185

4 posted 2002-01-15 06:37 PM

And you are a magnificent conveyor of thoughts, Sue. The flow was so smooth,sincere, and encompassed with your love. Such talent, Roger

Masked Intruder

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

5 posted 2002-01-24 02:03 PM

Excellent write! Held to your pattern, presented comparisons and contrasts fitting of your subject, AND managed to make me read it twice cuz I liked it! *grins*

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

6 posted 2002-01-28 01:13 AM

Sue,
What a wonderful poem. The consumate romantic. Well done.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2002-01-28 02:01 AM

This is one lucky person you write of!
I can think of no better prize
than the gift of these words from your pen.

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