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Chrissy
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since 2002-01-24
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Idaho, no I am not a farmer!

0 posted 2002-01-28 01:45 AM


It's not a special room
Or a special place
Void of discrimination
of gender and race
My dreams are my sacred
Utopia of thought
Dreams are limitless
and can't be caught
Dreams are what make
the world go 'roud
with them secure
My peace is sound
My dreams mold
and revitalize my soul
Without them
I could not stay whole
I rely on my dreams
to keep me sane
Heavenly euphoria
Hard to explain
Beyond the words I speak
Dreams create hope
Hope creates chance
My dreams are where life extends
Dreams never end

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Larry C
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1 posted 2002-01-28 01:54 AM


Chrissy,
Speaking as one who is "way too old" according to you...isn't it past your bedtime? Hmmmm? Excellent write but I think I'll look for some of the dreams about now! Good night.

Chrissy
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since 2002-01-24
Posts 81
Idaho, no I am not a farmer!
2 posted 2002-01-28 02:04 AM


okay okay....Maybe not WAY too old....and no bed time either..Fun Fun Fun..   Havent talked to sunshine Yet, but dont know weather to be happy....or worried..   Anyway, I do really enjoy your writing, you have a Funny side to everything...
ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
3 posted 2002-01-28 02:30 AM


yes, sometimes dreams can help you interpret patterns in life you would like to change and dreams can also be a way of coming toterms with the day's stresses nice write!


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