Interloping Snippets......Sunshine's Challenge

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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

0 posted 2002-01-13 11:37 AM

dance with me tonight
hold me close in your sweet love
keep your body close

warm sweet breath on ear
telling me of secret wants
I hear every word

dreams softly come true
with the meeting of our lips
sweet passion is stirred
filling hearts with emotion
dreams fullfilled in this,our kiss

together in dreams
we find a way
quietly whispering words
we want to say
in our minds
our thoughts are real
of this love
our hearts feel
giving, taking
uniting us two
together in dreams
just me and you....

loves timeless promise
the eternal gift of bliss
found within a kiss

~SEA~
the challenge
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with all that you are...
with all that you know...
love......

strbbux
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1 posted 2002-01-13 11:38 AM

"bliss found within a kiss" just beautiful, soft, romantic and lovely Sea. floria

sodpossom
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N.C

2 posted 2002-01-13 11:40 AM

Sea

Very,very beautiful words!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-13 11:41 AM

(smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...I love it, sweet friend, I should write poetic responses more often, for I'd love to try the challenge too! (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you forever dream away with love close to your heart and find that beacon of loves eternal promise! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is so lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Denise

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4 posted 2002-01-13 11:42 AM

Beautifully done, SEA!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-01-13 12:27 PM

Well done Sue, and a challenge very well met!
I love this! ~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

GenXer
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USA

6 posted 2002-01-13 12:44 PM

Sea - Very nice romantic write. Truly a snippet of art.

Dave

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-01-13 12:50 PM

Beautiful recollections...I knew you would rise to the challenge....!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-01-13 12:54 PM

wow...this is awesome....NOW...what is the
challenge???? I wanta know...????

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

9 posted 2002-01-13 12:58 PM

Circe darling girl I would say as always your writing is utterly utterly beautiful

And this challenge is wonderfully met by you darling girl as you've written pure delight and beauty

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

10 posted 2002-01-13 03:08 PM

together in dreams
we find a way

I really liked that line SEA.
If it is meant to be, love always
finds a way.

*Delightful*

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

11 posted 2002-01-14 05:14 AM

Sue, now I wish I had done more snippets rather than doing a whole poem when someone inspired me.

Then I could do something cool like this one.
Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

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