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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-01-10 09:44 PM


The sweet fragrance of musk
Seductively lingers in the air
Above the bed where we lay
As I succumb to your stare

So many nights I've dreamed
Of lying here with you
Now I see that my wish
Is finally coming true

As we add another chapter
To the book of love we write
We surrender to love's pleasures
In the still of the night

I hear your words of love
As they spill forth from your lips
How my heart starts beating faster
As your hands move towards my hips

We move together on love's ride
As our bodies sensually glide
So well we move to and fro
Before both of us let go

In the afterglow of love
I lay serenely in your arms
So very easily am I tempted
By your masculine charms

Another verse of love complete
Still many pages to get through
As I resign myself to love
And fill my mind with thoughts of you

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-01-10 09:49 PM


Oh Sue!  This is so sensual and beautiful!!
Lovely lovely romantic write....love it!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Larry C
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2 posted 2002-01-10 09:54 PM


Sue,
That is a wonderful book you're working on there! Great write.

brianbeaudry
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Northern Ontario Canada
3 posted 2002-01-10 09:57 PM


Beautiful and touching tribute to the love you two share Sue.Keep em coming dear friend!
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-01-10 10:14 PM




(sigh) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, may this true romance forever shine with beauty and joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you always write the most lovely words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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Canada
5 posted 2002-01-10 10:28 PM


Sizzling with hot sensual romance....that is some lover you are writing this book about ...BRAVO!! Magnificent. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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