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Victoria
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0 posted 2002-01-09 10:26 AM



Perched upon a branch of a mulberry tree
a brilliant red cardinal
above our deeply carved initials
a sweet songbird i watch in awe

Eating a cluster of tiny berries
tempting berries hang gracefully
waiting  for his pink crested mate
to share the morning tenderly

She appears and his feathered wings flutter
as crystal raindrops christens the tree
i remember words you silently uttered
standing beneath that mulberry with me

Let us carve our initials forever
And like two cardinals love faithfully



"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            



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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-01-09 10:55 AM


A delightful thought and write.
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2 posted 2002-01-09 11:04 AM


thank you Sy..nice to hear from you..as you see i changed the title ha..

              ~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


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3 posted 2002-01-09 11:14 AM


We have some of the most beautiful red cardinals here in Indiana.  I was emailing a friend in England and he said "send me a picture, what is a cardinal!"

can you imagine???

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

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4 posted 2002-01-09 11:25 AM


This is so very pretty, Victoria...We have a couple of pairs of cardinals that come to our bird feeder, regularly...
You did them justice with that beauty of a poem.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-01-09 11:28 AM


thank you Kathleen..maybe they dont have them in his neck of the woods..i love all birds..thanks for peeking in hon.. hugss

              ~Vic

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


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6 posted 2002-01-09 11:30 AM


Thank you Madame..and for the lovely flower..yes cardinals are life time mates..btw my son lives in Michigan too..in Centerline..hugs

             ~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


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7 posted 2002-01-09 11:39 AM


Victoria, what a perfect picture of love you painted with your words. Well done and a pleasure to read. Cheryl
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8 posted 2002-01-09 12:16 PM


Thank you very much Cheryl...nice to hear from you..glad you enjoyed

              ~Vic

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


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9 posted 2002-01-09 12:16 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, I love cardinals, and I could picture two lovebirds in a feather, cooing softly to each other in love! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, you are always so loving and inspiring! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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10 posted 2002-01-09 05:46 PM


Thank you Noah..yes the males are especially beautiful...thanks for peeking in dear one

              ~Vic

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


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11 posted 2002-01-09 09:11 PM


Wow, imagine that, faithful males..  I love the poem, and that's quite a nice picture.
Sandra

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12 posted 2002-01-09 10:00 PM


You are too funny...ha..hugss

          ~Vic

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