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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-01-05 10:43 AM


silence is golden
at least that's what we are told
but sometimes it hurts

Inspired by Marge Tindal’s response to one of my works.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2002-01-05 10:46 AM


*sigh* I love silence but when it is from one we are in love with it can hurt deeply. You always seem to capture so much with so few words. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-01-05 10:47 AM


Interloper,
Good one.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-01-05 11:25 AM



Well you could have at least given us the link to go look...we certainly hope you continue to be inspired...

VAS
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4 posted 2002-01-05 11:28 AM


Wow!  Bravo!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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5 posted 2002-01-05 11:29 AM




(sigh) That's so very true, sometimes silence can be so deafening when we are drawn into fear and tears, but as long as we look up to the light, we will find solace in serenity and peace. (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, may you forever brush your words with hope and golden beauty! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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with you
6 posted 2002-01-05 11:29 AM


yes, sometimes it hurts
the words twist until they are freed.....
very well said

Magnus
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7 posted 2002-01-05 10:46 PM


This could be one of life's basic philosophies....Nicely said..
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8 posted 2002-01-05 11:08 PM


So true. And another truth:
Ask, and ye shall receive.
But you don't always get
what you asked for.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2002-01-05 11:09 PM


Very well said, Interloper.  ~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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10 posted 2002-01-05 11:35 PM


Yes..especially when used as a gaming tool. Great senryu and message. Please never be silent here though.

Sincerely,
Regina

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11 posted 2002-01-05 11:54 PM


Now I can't do silence, ask almost anyone they will tell you I'm anything but silent.

But you're so right it does sometimes hurt. It is an art I should try to learn though.
Well written and well expressed


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


GenXer
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12 posted 2002-01-06 12:44 PM


Interloper - Three lines that contain so much truth.  Really good.

Dave

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13 posted 2002-01-06 12:56 PM


Silence..can be light or dark...for me both are the most beautiful gift..as it is there..I FEEL..   Great verse!

Shelly

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