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craigrk
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since 2001-12-23
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0 posted 2002-01-02 06:50 PM




Polo and Marcy
announce their engagement –
Edwardo demonstrates his backhand –
Bishop Sheen glares
smilingly over his mint iced tea –
and as the olive turns
in my stomach
I spill martini
on my new flannel pants
and Molly becomes concerned.
Closing her Chippendale eyes
she wraps her Andalusian tongue
around the stain
and I remember why
it was I had agreed to come.

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2002-01-02 07:08 PM


This is a wonderful, fresh poem!

Kathleen (Kay)

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (01-02-2002 07:08 PM).]

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
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2 posted 2002-01-02 07:19 PM


Closing her Chippendale eyes
she wraps her Andalusian tongue
around the stain
and I remember why
it was I had agreed to come.

I imagine that would redeem the afternoon a bit.  Different, interesting...enjoyed much!

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-02 07:25 PM


Haha this was nice, really different. floria
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