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craigrk
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0 posted 2002-01-02 04:02 PM



Midnight Ski

Your coaxing
burgundy-spiked spirit
warmed a naked
frosted frame,
as bonfire blueblood
glow on urgent
underbrush and snow
melted any shivering
inhibition.



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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-01-02 04:18 PM


I like this--like a thought-print of words.
Kinda gave me the shivers though, as it's COLD here (for New Orleans, anyway)

Startime
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2 posted 2002-01-02 04:37 PM


*giggling* I just can't say what this made me see.......mmmmmmm I better leave the oysters alone...my thoughts are getting out of hand. A wonderful poem that I loved visualizing. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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