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Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2002-01-01 09:06 PM

Spirit of My Mountain

The spirit of the mountain summons my heart
She reaches deep within to my most hidden part
Soon it will be time to return to the mountains
For one last time

For I shall join the spirit of my mountain
The love we had flowed like a natural fountain
Although I lived I died
When I lost her to that mountain

She is the only reason I had to live
She returned all the love I had to give
When that storm took her away
It took my will to live

So as this year ends
So does my loneliness end
For I shall go to that mountain
And let our lives together begin

I hear her calling gently upon the mighty north wind
Come to me, let our forever begin
Come to our mountain
Forever to stay

© alan
2001

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-01 09:11 PM

Alan, I feel this so deep inside, the feeling of being drawn to something....I loved this poem

I am/Kathleen/

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-01-01 09:12 PM

*sigh* absolutely stunning. The magic of this poem is amazing. Filled with emotion and vision. I love it, Alan. May the New Year make all your dreams into realities. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2002-01-01 09:31 PM

Lovely Alan. Love is always worth returning for, fighting for, living for.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

4 posted 2002-01-01 10:19 PM

Alan...TRULY BEAUTIFUL!!! I see the yearning in each word and I hear the forever of love.

***Ivy Rose

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2002-01-01 10:48 PM

Alan,
this goes perfectly with the story you have over in Prose....this is so emotional, and felt with the heart....

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-01-01 11:39 PM

(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, swet Alan, I love it!!! (big hugggssssss) May you climb over all the mountains of passions and forever sing upon the crest of joy in life with true love! We all love you so much, sweet Alan, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

C?
Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 190

7 posted 2002-01-01 11:43 PM

The spirit of the mountains is an awesome force, I liked this a lot

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

8 posted 2002-01-02 12:21 PM

Irish,,,,I am glad you read this... thank you for your comments

Star.... thanks...I hope you and the little one had a good couple of holidays

Tracey.. it is good to find you still here. thanks for your kind comments

Ivy.... it is a pleasant surprise to find you here.... I am glad you liked it

SEA.... as sweet as always... i am trying to work myself up to do another short story...based on a return trip

Noah... thak you my friend

C?.... I am glad you liked it...

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

9 posted 2002-01-02 12:54 PM

I used to frequent the beaches while in Italy and then was slowly drawn away from the sand and to the mountains for solace and refuge..quite like the habitats there in the Apenines.Your poem is strong in sentiment, here, bravo!

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

10 posted 2002-01-02 05:05 PM

Alan, such a sad, sweet story. I loved the read.
Sea is right, it does fit in with the short story you did.
Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

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