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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-01-01 02:22 PM


Lovely home of couches
I lay down my whole blanket of body
in sweet message from tender hands,
where I relax with pipes of thoughts.

With scents of candles fill the air,
giving the abode a beam of stars,
I lay my ink on the snow white of paper
where I compose the state of my mind.

~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.
~Just when I thought it is too far away, opportunity knocks the door

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-01 02:25 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your loving heart always quill the beauty of thoughts and fantasy in lovely verse! (kiss on cheek) May your lovely abode forever twinkle with inspiration! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-01-01 03:20 PM


Feels like home...James
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2002-01-08 03:12 PM


I have to tell you this is a marvelous piece of writing, it left me with a wonderful
feeling of hope...in writing..life..everything.

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

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