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Adore you?....Oh Yes...Can I Not?
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Adore you?....Oh Yes...Can I Not? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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The softest eyes, a tear falling from them. A tear of deepest joy, of remembered times. Moments shared with another, not forgotten. Thoughts of soft nights, warm fires, shadows. Yes, I too remember...I too shed that tear. A small river of happiness wandering down. Visibly, one would think of sadness.. Inside, the greatest feeling of completeness. Love you? Surely you know that answer. For I have loved you from the very first glance. I can’t recall what was said, I was spellbound. I can only remember your eyes...your face.. Stop loving you...absurd...not in this life. For our eternity of togetherness will remain. I have each second of you within me.. My vault is locked, filled with riches of you. Adore you?...My...how could I ever not. You thrill me each moment, my eyes laugh back. I cannot ever stop adoring you, ever.. For without you...I would be lost..alone.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry, I love the way you ask the question and then answer it...as if...almost reading her mind. Very very romantic...lovely. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Nancy, I like writing that way.. Sort of a reflection within the mind and the answer to the thoughts... Hope you are feeling better.. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Adore you?...My...how could I ever not. You thrill me each moment, my eyes laugh back. I cannot ever stop adoring you, ever.. For without you...I would be lost..alone.. Simply beautiful Mr. Valentino...from your warm heart.. ~Victoria~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy Love this? How could I not? Utterly utterly wonderful YOU write with such beauty, this is really beautiful. Do I love this poem? Is the sky still the home of the sun, does the sea still lap the shore? Then yes darling boy I love it As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Magnus - a very special someone you have written words about. Nicely done.... BC |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Barry, Your words are always so soft and beautiful  Once again I enjoyed your writing.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I can hear Lou sighing over this one. Absolutely filled with wonderful romance. Very well done, Magnus. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well writ! I love it! Bravo! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
Omigod i loved this piece so much..it put tears in my eyes, for i to have someone i could say this to or about .. i loved the part: For I have loved you from the very first glance. I can’t recall what was said, I was spellbound. I can only remember your eyes...your face.. b/c when i met Josh, twas how it went... Wonderful piece thanks for sharing ....Handle with care... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Victoria...am truly pleased that you enjoyed a spontaneous write...I just blurted it out this afternoon... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marsha, are you telling me you liked this... having a little trouble with your thoughts. (kidding) Thank You... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
BC...thanx and I didn't write mine at 3 A.M.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tara, as always...ever gracious...thank you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...yepper...tis true...Lou do... Thanx... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Interloper...you are gonna have to tell me where you got your pen name from...So unique...like it... Thanx.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Allysa, Thank you...wow...liked your words..glad you could relate...Nice meeting you for the first time...thanx again |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautifully romantic poem, Barry. I hope that you showed it to the woman you love. Great job!  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Madame C...yep.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, with the loving heart you have she will always adore you too and the serenades you write for her! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah, Thank you my young friend... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read this...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well, now I think you should read this to her! Kathleen-- |
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