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Tracey
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0 posted 12-27-2001 01:24 AM       View Profile for Tracey   Email Tracey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tracey

Winters Love Reflected

As I sit with thoughts of you,
Wind of howling, lovers blue
Think of me, of hearts on fire
Take this flame, take my desire
Hold me like the ground to snow
Not like loves gone long ago
When you dream take me along
When you sing, make me the song
Nuzzle deep into my skin
Take me to a new begin

As the snow falls to the ground
Hold me to this new love found
See the sky the stars shine bright
Hold me to that candle light
Ride with me on waves of love
Come with me soar to above
When the night seems oh so long
When the world seems oh so wrong
Take a love and hold it there
Take my love, enough to share

If the wave soars to a crest
And if the sun sets in the west
Know I gave my heart to you
Take it, hold it, keep it, do
As your heartbeat echoes near
I can feel its hold my dear
Hold my heart there next to yours
Gently hold as love it soars
Take this fairytale for two
Lovers dream for me and you



If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

[This message has been edited by Tracey (12-27-2001 01:25 AM).]

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When you dream take me along
When you sing, make me the song
Nuzzle deep into my skin
Take me to a new begin

As the snow falls to the ground
Hold me to this new love found
See the sky the stars shine bright
Hold me to that candle light
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well this is lovely...in its cadence and in its imagery and especially in its devotion.
Someone is well inspired and all a glow
looks like a warm winter LOL
very cool poem poetess Tracey.

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
Thats the way love is ... sky blue and black.

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2 posted 12-27-2001 01:42 AM       View Profile for ctowen   Email ctowen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ctowen's Home Page   View IP for ctowen

Wow ... this reflection is blinding!
Melts the snow from any heart gone cold.
I do hope your winters wish shines upon you!
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Tracey, this is wonderful. I have felt these wishes myself. I hope yours all come to fruition. You did this poem beautifully.
Sandra
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Tracey

Magnificant.  I felt I was with you on each verse.  Very nicely done.
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Tracey,
A good write a good read, enjoyed. *L*
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(smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may this romantic fairy-tale forever become a dream come true for you and your love! (kiss on cheek) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tracey, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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When the night seems oh so long
When the world seems oh so wrong
Take a love and hold it there
Take my love, enough to share

Would it make any sense to say that your poetry gives me back moments that I'd thought stolen, gone forever?  Your heart, your talent...are rare.  Thanks, Trace for so often turning the wrong around and making the winter...warmer.
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I'm not big on gushy verse, but you have one line here that I find extraordinarily good:

       "Hold me like the ground to snow".

Bravo!


Glenn Logan
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JM, thank you so much..yes, I was well inspired for this one

Craig, yes, we will see if the winter wishes come true. Love your blinding reflection line.

Sandra, I hope both our wishes come true. Tuesday brings a new year and I donít think either of us will be sorry to see the old one go.  

Ariana, thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate them greatly.

Seymour, from you, who write such incredible romantic verseÖso glad you enjoyed this one

Noah, you are so sweet. Yes, lets hope both our dreams come true.  

Duncan, yes, it would make very much sense.  And thank you for the times you have been there for me too. Do you think the warm winter we are having has anything to do with us??  

Glenn, thank you so much for your comments. Glad you found something that hit you in it.


If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

[This message has been edited by Tracey (12-27-2001 12:17 PM).]

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Wow. "Hold me like the ground to snow"
Now that really is a serious Lover's dream.
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Tracey,
Man...just when I was buying it I find that it's a fairytale! Enticing write.
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"When you sing, make me the song"

What a nice line and a very nice piece of writing too, my friend.  Enjoyed much, Tracey.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.††

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"If the wave soars to a crest
And if the sun sets in the west
Know I gave my heart to you
Take it, hold it, keep it, do
As your heartbeat echoes near
I can feel its hold my dear
Hold my heart there next to yours
Gently hold as love it soars
Take this fairytale for two
Lovers dream for me and you"

Wow... this is an amazing piece.  In addition to the fact that the technical side of this poem is flawless, the images that nostalgia that you conjure up in my mind are breathtaking.  Thank you for this trip down memory-lane.  I loved this...

--Marie

"It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

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Tracey...Very fluid, romantic poem. ENJOYED reading this immensely!!!!!!!  **Ivy Rose
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Take this fairytale for two
Lovers dream for me and you

Sometimes it just takes one of the dreamers a little longer to get with the program, ya know?
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Tracey....I will simply say, I love this.
I am not going to even try to pick and choose my favourite lines...it wouldn't do it justice.
Incredible write!  
~Hugs, Nancy~

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

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The perfect love poem
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Wow! This is absolutely beautiful!
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Completely enjoyed these thoughts ... start to finish
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Tracy, this is good...very good You have thrown some wonderful metaphors in here and made it a true love poem of high quality. Very impressive
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Kacy, yes, a serious lovers dream. Remains to see whether dreams come true though

Larry, so, you were buying it were you? Lol. Nevermind, fairytales are so pretty though arenít they? Think Iíll find myself one to live in one of these days.

Michael, yes, that was one of my favourite lines too. Thank you for reading my friend. And so glad you are still here.

Marie, thank you so much for those wonderful words. Glad it took you down memory lane. A big welcome to you, so nice to see new poets

Ivy Rose, Iím so glad you enjoyed this piece. And a big welcome to the forums to you.

Duncan, yes, I know. It only takes one to hold a dream, but it takes two to make a dream come true. Though, that makes me think of a song I know, ďyouíve got to have a dream, if you donít have a dream, how you going to have a dream come trueĒ.

Nancy, I am so flattered by your comments. Thank you so much

Walker, thank you so much for reading. So glad you liked it

EagleOne, thank you for the wow, and for reading

Rex, Iím so glad you enjoyed it.

Michael, coming from such a talented poet, I value this praise very highly

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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Tracey

This was so lovely! Just such beautiful
words flowing from your heart. I have missed
reading your work. Keep writing your wonderful
words of love and I'll keep reading! take
care. happy new year and best wishes!

Amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

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If the wave soars to a crest
And if the sun sets in the west
Know I gave my heart to you
Take it, hold it, keep it, do
As your heartbeat echoes near
I can feel its hold my dear
Hold my heart there next to yours
Gently hold as love it soars
Take this fairytale for two
Lovers dream for me and you

Is it August, yet?



One blaze of glory - glory
find
glory
in a song that rings true
truth like a blazing fire
an eternal flame

Jonathan Larson  

[This message has been edited by Duncan (07-16-2002 11:45 AM).]

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Mmm... floats like vintage '70s Stevie Wonder. Thank you for writing this.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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