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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia 
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I don’t think you really know the feelings you can create when your words flow over me opening emotions gate. Touching me with your sweetness, reaching deep into my soul, love overflows from my heart, rushing like a waterfall. All I see through the mist is the welcome in your eyes. All I hear above the roar are the sweet words your heart cries. Look through my eyes, my sweet one, I am sure you too will see a gentle and tender soul and the love he has for me. I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You touch the heartstrings softly with this one, Dee  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhhhh. . . refreshing. . . let it flow Dee. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Dee This was stunning and so very beautiful. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I don’t think you really know the feelings you can create when your words flow over me opening emotions gate' I love this...stunning is a great word to describe it...a keeper in my eyes, for sure...excellent write! sp   And did you know with the rain in your pockets, |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
'Deer, thank you. I am pleased it had that effect Sven, it seems to be flowing all by itself Sue, thank you my friend. Glad you liked it. snowpants, it is an honour that you feel this is a keeper. Thank you. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is so lovely Dee... wonderful use of imagery and metaphor of the waterfall to enhance the express of the emotions. All wrapped up in rhyme and sweet sincerety. A lovely inspire and intend. well done poetess girlie, so good to see your work again You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a lovesly poem. Thank you for posting it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dee~ This beauty was a treat to find in my mailbox this morning~ Stunningly lovely .... Thank you for being a wonderful poet and friend~ *Hugs*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Dee, This is beautifully written, tender, truly one of your best. Such nice work here, my friend. (((hugs))) Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Dee, this is wonderful work... regards, sudhir |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dee, this is so beautiful |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Dee, this is a wonderful sweet and loving piece, from a sweet and lovely poet. Thank you for your friendship. Parker |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
very very fine piece loving sentiments vividly stated! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Janet, thank you. Your comments mean a lot to me. SmartChick, glad you enjoyed. Marge, and thank you for what you do for me Glad you liked.Vandana, thank you for reading and replying. Michael, it is amazing what one can write when they are inspired. Sudhir, you are another who's comments mean much Thank you sir.Sea, I am pleased you, who writes romance so well, liked my words. Thanks Parker, another who's romantic words impress me. From one friend to another, you are welcome. VAS, wow, thank you for the 'very, very'. With the love and support I recieve here you all make it so much easier for me to write. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, guys.  Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! A vivid mixture of emotion I see in this. And yes I agree, amongst your best, take care! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eddie, thank you. Your comments mean a lot to me. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just wanted you to know that this is one of my favorites of yours and I think a major turning point in your poetry. The cadence was supreme, the imagery kissed the emotions delicately, and it reads like a song out loud or silently either one. Beautiful is this piece and mesmerizing is the draw lingereing in your eyes. Library for sure and put on a special shelf reserved only for you. Recognize love for the gift it is and not a need that is out of focus. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
oops, twice in two days......("click") see how mesmerized we get? |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Mark, you are good for my ego you know. I consider myself an average poet but you make me feel like a master. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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