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PoetriPrincess
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0 posted 2001-11-30 11:56 AM


It can often be a Song,
A Song, sung so sweetly
It will punch you in the gut
to let you know its there,
Touch you so deep as to touch
Your very Soul

A Movie, life so real
It will bring about a smile
Then, in turn bring you weeping to Tears
Touch- your very being
As close, as losing someone you love
Making its point
by bringing it close to home

Unlike, any other day
But, one bluest of blue--seeming,
To flow on forever.
A moment in time- that seems to stand still
As it takes your breath away it captures
But, could never take its place.


[This message has been edited by PoetriPrincess (edited 11-30-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-11-30 11:56 AM



What a breathtaking Entrance into Passions!  I for one sincerely hope you find your way to calling this place your New Home!  

Please check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


OLIAS
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2 posted 2001-11-30 12:09 PM


Wonderful first post, I hope to read more of your work. Welcome to passions.

Regards,
Olias.

Sven
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3 posted 2001-11-30 12:11 PM


or, it can be a poem. . . a poem like this. . .  

welcome. . . very well done. . . hope to see more of your work. . . please take a look around. . .

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SEA
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with you
4 posted 2001-11-30 12:13 PM


I like this very much! Welcome  
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5 posted 2001-11-30 12:20 PM


Welcome to Passions, the friendliest site I know. Enjoyed.
RosePetal
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6 posted 2001-11-30 12:32 PM


Breath-taking indeed...A warm welcome to you!

Enchantress
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7 posted 2001-11-30 01:21 PM



BEAUTIFUL FIRST POST!!
I look forward to seeing more of your work!
   ~Hugs, NancyLee~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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8 posted 2001-11-30 01:33 PM


Very nice poem, welcome to passions.
Sandra

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Gaia
9 posted 2001-11-30 06:51 PM


'A moment in time- that seems to stand still
As it takes your breath away it captures
But, could never take its place.'

With an entrance like this, you will find
this site very welcoming you with open poetic arms. Well done! WELCOME, PoetriPrincess.

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