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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-11-30 01:52 AM


Am I Losing You?

Oh where oh where
can my true love be?
She seems so close yet
so far away from me.
I thought I knew exactly
who my lover was to be
until she showed her
displeasure with me.

Much to soon for this love
to turn painfuly demure
and as my heart approaches
totally confused and unsure
I pause to pray these
hopeful heartfelt words...
"God I love her and whatever you do
please don't let me lose her."

JamesLee
November30
2001



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peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
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OK, USA
1 posted 2001-11-30 02:07 AM


James,
You touched my heart with this one.I hope this doens't happen to you my dear sweet friend.
Peaches

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2001-11-30 09:53 AM


Good luck, James Sometims it seems that love is so much about insecurity and fear of loss. I wish it was not that way.
Sandra

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
3 posted 2001-11-30 10:02 AM


Sweet James...I join my prayers to yours that she may see the tenderness of the love you feel for her and offer you the love that your heart so desires. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-11-30 10:18 AM


I have faith in you, James, go after her!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

SEA
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with you
5 posted 2001-11-30 10:19 AM


James, this is soooooooo tender. You are so dear  

"If your ship doesn't come in, swim out to it." ~Jonathan Winters

RosePetal
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6 posted 2001-11-30 01:41 PM


James,

I hope she realizes how lucky of a lady she is to have your love.
Best Wishes to you always,

RP

Sven
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7 posted 2001-11-30 01:44 PM


sometimes, my friend. . . we must lose to find. . .

well done. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2001-11-30 01:59 PM


Ah sweet friend....you won't lose her!
Think positive....think 'love thoughts'  
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03
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on the horizon of a fairytale
9 posted 2001-11-30 02:52 PM


simply beautiful

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

Abigaile
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since 2001-10-21
Posts 112
San Mateo, CA
10 posted 2001-11-30 03:21 PM


Very powerful sentiments. If you truly love her, let that be your guide, and all else will be right.

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
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11 posted 2001-11-30 10:26 PM


A beautiful song of longing. I hope all works out for you James.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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