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SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

0 posted 2001-11-30 12:06 PM

Faint, a wall away, and heat beside again,
again always, and I, said I’d walk the world in circles,
tangle neighborhoods with love or wire,
and I’ve never been barefoot like this before.
Never felt the slip of red in hours,
never braided veins with acceptance, no,
just weakened twists of carry in a form. A form.
Oh my! It's Friday and I'm breathing.

I'm breathing and it's raining won't you see.
Time is on the tip of me, and I could run instead,
weave the chaos through the streets. Oh no.
Leave the love and wire by the door.
And I could shape a silver road into the sea,
chase a cloud for miles on a high,
instead, I slide along a brickway in the darkness,
and taste a scream of tongue before the day.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2001-11-30 12:11 PM

interesting..
we should hang out sometime ;-)

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-11-30 10:00 AM

Shivering from that trip.
Shatteringly strong words, take care of you.
Sandra

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-11-30 10:54 AM

SpitFire~
Something very engaging captured me in this piece~

'and I, said I’d walk the world in circles'

I think I will be reading this one time and again~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

PoetriPrincess
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 55
CA / U.S.A

4 posted 2001-11-30 11:26 AM

This poem struck me as being subtle & and mild
I liked it.

Friends & Poems,
From Poetri Princess

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-11-30 12:30 PM

well done with this. . .

you always manage to put the most interesting view and pictures in my mind. . . it's what continuously draws me back. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

6 posted 2001-11-30 10:50 PM

Your words never fail to grab me, to bring something to me. Thank you!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

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