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If I Left... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
If I Left... By: Noah Eaton 11/28/01 If I left Would you miss me? Would you care If I felt hopelessly? If I left Would you laugh or cry? Would you forget my name Or want me to fly? If I left Would I change anything? Have I meant something at all Or just a waste of time you see If I left Would you pat my shoulder? And beg me to stay Forever and ever... Or would you turn away? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Noah, well you know if you left here, lots of people would miss you. But if you are talking in terms of other relationships, I think it seems to go both ways. Sometimes people really care, and notice when we leave, and then there are the cold hearted ones that don't. I have met my share of those kind. I am still trying to figure out how one person that I thought really cared for me can completely close me out of his life. In the end, we only have us, I guess. Our own spirit has to sustain us. Love you. Be happy. Sandra |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I would miss you.........so don't leave ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're not allowed to leave. Period. and thanks for this! |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Oh Noah, I hope you're not meaning to leave us. I hope you do not, coz your presence really does make a difference. I've too realised many times that when you contribute in small ways, like a smile, or even a gentle pat on the shoulder. You would have made a whole world of difference. And then people do remember you for all those little things you do, that you think nobody noticed. You just never knew that they love you for it too.  |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Well I know I would miss you....and I would remember your name...and your beautifuly poetry!  You would definately be missed here my friend! Love ya Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
truly interesting question..... and like the others i forbid you to leave.. because tlent like that should be displayed for the whole Netpoets Family to see. keep writing, GhostWriter_6 |
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PoetriPrincess Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 55CA / U.S.A |
We hope not, but by if by some strange instance you did, u you would have left a trail of Beautiful Words behind. Depart Not, Poetic One  Your Inspiration behooves us, your torch continually burns A Musician must make his Music, An Artist must Paint, A Poet must Write, if he/she is to ultimately be at Peace with himself. ~ Abraham Ma [This message has been edited by PoetriPrincess (edited 12-03-2001).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
If you left, I admit it I would cry. ~tying noah to his computer chair~ you aren't leaving us buddy, so forgetaboutit! love, Joanna |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good for you Joanna! You hold him down and I'll tape his fingers to the keyboard! Noah you aren't going anywhere! Cuz Nancy said so!! HUGS! "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sounds like you have been told more than once ... I guess you have made a difference in life. However, in Sandra's words, there are various ways this piece can be taken, and various pains forsaken. We must all find our way, though well wished, to make it another day. Whatever the meaning for you Noah, I hope it contains all the dreams, stardust, and smiles you share so openly. |
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