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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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fossil (c)2001 Night Hawke pressed in negative relief adamantine walls etch away the remaining details of time the cavity of once was sifted sand the half life of evil spun three hundred thirty three and I am the last minaret the last shard the last leaves blown away save the tracings of six year olds as am I excluding children's eyes where I am less mortal [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 11-26-2001).] |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
WOW, amazing write... truly amazing... ever deep...runs |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I agree!!! And awesome pic : ) |
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desert fox New Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 7 |
am not sure I understand the first 2 verses, but the ending is very nicely woven... |
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Carolina Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 224Myrtle Beach, SC |
Thank you for another fantastic read, LR!! If you kept em coming every day, I would live at peace in this world.  Live today as if it's your last. Love today as if it's your first. Lisa |
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