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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-11-27 09:22 AM



somewhere in mem’ry
the facets of my love live
never forgotten
~*~



Inspired by:  Somewhere



Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.


[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-27-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-11-27 09:27 AM



As always, you take a poem and synopsize is beautifully....

well done...

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2 posted 2001-11-27 09:31 AM


Interloper,
Good one.

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3 posted 2001-11-27 09:42 AM


yes, somewhere

I'm terribly curious as to what the graphic was that does not appear for me

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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with you
4 posted 2001-11-27 09:47 AM


so beautifully said   *sigh*  
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5 posted 2001-11-27 10:09 AM


Gently said.
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6 posted 2001-11-27 10:13 AM


smiling at the title alone...(I've got a rotten memory at times) but I admire your ability to say so much and so little. Me? I can never shut up!!!! Well done, Interloper!
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7 posted 2001-11-27 10:47 AM


Loper,

I am truly honored....
Very beautifully done.

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

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8 posted 2001-11-27 10:50 AM


Perfect summation of this thought.
Sandra

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9 posted 2001-11-27 11:00 AM


Sunshine ~
Thank you for the wonderful comment  

Sy ~
Thank you my friend.

Virginia ~
I got the image fixed.  Thanks for the visit.

SEA ~
Oh my, a SEA sigh.  Melt my heart  

Bob ~
What a pleasant surprise.  Thanx for dropping by my friend    

Serenety ~
You can talk to me anytime  


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-27-2001).]

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10 posted 2001-11-27 11:35 AM


Just these 3 simple lines rings true in many of our hearts, coz this is a common experience, and you've written it really short and sweetly in just 3 lines. 'Tis just Beautiful!  
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11 posted 2001-11-27 11:39 AM


Mon Cherie ~
Merci beaucoups  


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-27-2001).]

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12 posted 2001-11-27 11:40 AM


I loved this...
*~coco~*

Interloper
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13 posted 2001-11-27 11:40 AM


Coco ~
And it loves you, too  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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14 posted 2001-11-27 12:23 PM


EXQUISITE!!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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15 posted 2001-11-27 12:29 PM


*sigh* and such tender and beautiful those memories must be. This poem is warmly filled with love and I absolutely love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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16 posted 2001-11-27 12:42 PM


Enchantress ~
Yes, you are

Startime ~
{blush}  Thank you.  You just made my day

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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17 posted 2001-11-27 01:00 PM


WOW! So much meaning packed into three little lines, I LOVE IT! *BIG WARM FUZZY HUGS*

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

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18 posted 2001-11-27 01:23 PM


Abigaile ~
My first time to have you visit. Welcome, and thank you for the big hugz  


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-27-2001).]

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19 posted 2001-11-27 07:17 PM


You sure have great inspirations. Love it.
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20 posted 2001-11-27 08:18 PM


I loved this! But the first time I read it, I misread it. I read faces....
  Speed reading isn't my forte anymore.

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Deep in the heart
21 posted 2001-11-28 09:07 AM


Walker ~
Thank you, and your 'gator

Midnitesun ~
Whatsamatta?  The piece is too long for "normal" reading

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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