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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale


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Somewhere….

Somewhere in a memory
there is a touch
a touch that warms
and chills in it’s caress

there is a kiss
a kiss so soft
yet intense with passion

somewhere in a memory
there is a whispered breath
shared between two
one which is heard in volumes

there is a love
gentle and slow
yet fierce with desire

somewhere in a memory
the promise of forever leaves
and a dying heart lives in longing…

achildsheart
11-09-01

this woman's soul drowned in the shallow waters of a man's heart.

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-09-2001 11:01 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Beautiful and tender write of loving memories.  Well written AWC...

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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This....suits your pen name very well....
Irish Rose
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it certainly does suit your pen name, it's soft and tender......

Kathleen
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also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

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AWhispersCaress~
I find this so lovely~

'somewhere in a memory
there is a whispered breath
shared between two
one which is heard in volumes'


I know that memory, that breath, that sharing~
Thank you for putting it so poetically~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Deep in the heart


5 posted 11-09-2001 11:25 AM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Annie, this is beautiful.  Simply beautiful.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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(sigh) Oh Annie, you are such a romantic! (sigh) Soft but passionate, sweet but enticing! Your words of love always have my heart swooning to the beauty of them! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
A Whisper's Caress
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7 posted 11-09-2001 01:48 PM       View Profile for A Whisper's Caress   Email A Whisper's Caress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Whisper's Caress

Well, I have to say I wasn't sure how well this would go over. There are so many contradictions I just wasn't very sure about it. I thank each of you for the very generous replies.

Thanks.....
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Hi, to bad this poem is all the way over in the closed forum. I didn't see it before Interlopers poem, and I think it is very good, says much of the way we feel about memories.
Sandra  
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Somewhere in time~


9 posted 11-27-2001 12:02 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

I am so pleased I didn't miss this one this morning!  Lovely yet sadly haunting.
Hugs, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

 
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