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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-11-26 09:18 PM

Some Days

I awaken to the sun's rays, streaming through the blinds.
Replaying thoughts and visions of the past in dreamscape minds.
Not wanting to alight, needing comfort behind these eyes.
My imprisoned heart, in shadow's arms, foregoes the morning rise.

Feelings that I hold for you increase their depth each day.
A mixture of a summer's kiss, suspending me in play
Of satin, silks and shadow dance and stardust in it's fall.
Romantic me, lit up by night, emotions moved by all.

The face of moon is laced in myst, yet softly travels time,
Reaching through the blue of me in skyscape words of rhyme.
Bonded to the petals of each cycled thought expressed,
Behind these eyes are verses held in pages, mind impressed.

To balance all in harmony, a legacy of love,
A gift of heart that reigns in touch, by words on lines above.

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-26-2001).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-11-26 09:22 PM

Maureen,
Every day in every way you get better and better. *L*

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

2 posted 2001-11-26 09:24 PM

Nicely penned emotions, Maureen.....I enjoyed.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-11-26 09:32 PM

Sy, you make me smile...I just try hard ..it's in my nature

Thank you

Elizabeth, thank you for your response *s

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2001-11-26 09:39 PM

Wynter,

I enjoyed this very much! You brought a smile to my face.

RP

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-11-26 09:53 PM

A mixture of a summer's kiss, suspending me in play
Of satin, silks and shadow dance and stardust in it's fall.
Romantic me, lit up by night,  emotions moved by all.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Maureen, this just wanted to pick me up and twirl around the room!  Splendid!
Enjoyed this one soooo much!
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2001-11-26 09:54 PM

Kinda smiled at this too - a dreamy sort of smile - kinda wishful...Mmmm,

jwesley

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-11-26 11:15 PM

Oh, this is very beautiful. I like the flow, it just melts through your mind.
Sandra

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-11-27 12:28 PM

How I love to see the smile of you come through your words

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-11-27 12:30 PM

Sy is right, you ARE getting better, I'm glad you re still writing and here with us and thank you for you friendship, it means a lot.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

10 posted 2001-11-27 01:12 PM

WOW!!!Did you ever capture well what happens to me every morning when I start to wake up. I would much rather stay in my dream world where I am laying in the loving embrace of my lover. Very well done. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

11 posted 2001-11-27 02:11 PM

This is quite lovely,
Flows well and holds deep emotion

Gloom

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2001-11-27 03:14 PM

(sigh) Oh Maureen, this is so so beautiful, I love dreaming all the time! (smiles) Your lovely lips sing with the beauty of sunshine and love in all glorious rapture! (smiles) I wish I could dream forever until I woke up in the arms of my dream girl. (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

13 posted 2001-11-27 05:33 PM

I love this poem. Enjoyed the read all through.

"Bonded to the petals of each cycled thought expressed,
Behind these eyes are verses held in pages, mind impressed".

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

14 posted 2001-11-28 12:42 PM

RosePetal, if I brought you a smile, then it's a shared one *s

Nancy~ oh do you do that once in a while..just twirl around the room? Me too. *s thank you

jwesley ..yes it's wishful, hopeful and at times real *s thank you.

cat...melts through a mind...that is a nice thought *s Thank you, Sandra

Interloper...you are a smile I think that infects us all.

Kay, I don't know if he right or not, but I enjoy writing some days more than others.
hugsss to you, keep that chin up.

Startime, isn't morning wonderful when you can remember  some of your dreams..just before they fade again into the light?{{hugsssss}}

PG, lovely sometimes comes from an overflow of after-moments when deep emotions reign. *w  thank you

Noah, some day your princess will come and  she will see the  beautiful and loving heart  you have.

Daniel, I appreciate your kind thoughts and I liked those lines best also.

My thanks to everyone.

~Wynter/Maureen

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

15 posted 2001-11-28 05:04 PM

Beautiful!!!!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

16 posted 2001-12-01 06:50 AM

Charisma, nice to see you hugssssss and thank you for stopping by

Maureen

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-01-2001).]

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

17 posted 2001-12-01 12:18 PM

Wynter - romantic, telling, and sharing of your heart. I love what you write...

BC

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

18 posted 2001-12-01 12:34 PM

This is just beautiful!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

19 posted 2001-12-02 06:45 AM

Bill Charles.. I love what you write also, thanks BC

SmartChick..*s thanks

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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