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Mon Cherie
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Land of Never-ending Summers

0 posted 2001-12-01 11:53 AM


The construction site
On the corner of Colin Clark
Almost complete
Safe for the wet paint

They seem to cry out
I am ready!
For my intended purposes
I am ready to serve

My sentiments exactly
I am ready to serve
Like a debutante at her first ball
Hope I am not a disappointment

Skies a-glow with different hues
Setting sun
Bidding farewell to
A marvellous chapter of my life

Purple clinging glories
Bloomed in the light of dawn
Bow their heads now mourning
Adieu to you too.

[This message has been edited by Mon Cherie (edited 12-01-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-01 12:12 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Mon, this made me cry, my heart goes out to you! (sad sigh) One door may close, but another will open, and love and happiness will come out and a whole new joy will open for you! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet Mon! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



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2 posted 2001-12-01 12:42 PM


And now you turn a page and with courage and determination you start a whole new chapter of your life. I know you will do just fine. BRAVO!!! I love the way you wrote this. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

jwesley
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3 posted 2001-12-01 12:51 PM


Ah now, this is one I wish I had written...

jwesley

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4 posted 2001-12-01 12:55 PM


Mon Cherie,
What a way to say goodbye. *L*

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5 posted 2001-12-01 05:10 PM


Very sad, well done poem.
Hugs
Sandra

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6 posted 2001-12-01 07:25 PM


What a wonderful way to step forward onto the next avenue in your life. A wistful goodbye smile, then onto the next adventure.
Mon Cherie
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7 posted 2001-12-02 04:58 AM


Thank you guyz! Thanks for reading this and enjoying it... Thanks for replying with such comforting messages... It soothes the soul  
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