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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
There you sit, in an old wooden chair. You know the one, like an old friend, it’s familiar creaking keeps you company. Through your pen, crimson tears spill from your heart, in search of the gentle dabbing from a cloth held in a loving hand. Looking out the window you’ve turned away from the tears wept onto fine linen stationary, wondering….. “Has my heart become a stranger to me, having lost it to her?” Look beyond the windowpane, beyond the pain. New hopes lie in the colours of seasonal change, and as dreams swirl in winter’s bluster, know your heart will always be known to mine. Love….. ever deep...runs the wishing well for fairytale illusions [This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (edited 11-26-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This feels like a letter waiting to be sent... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, what Sunshine said. You've penned it, now send it  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Annie, this is so beautiful! And so healing. |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
The play on words in the title captured me immediately. I love to play that way. Good job. CM |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Everyone, Thank you. I am so happy this was enjoyed. And yes, I did send it as a letter, thanks for the support. Snail mail...just seems more meaningful that way. ever deep...runs |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
This was a comfort to read. Thank you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Another lovely poem this morning...the sun sems to be brighter today *s ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I'm betting the recipient of this letter will be deeply touched. It is beautiful If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Look beyond the windowpane, beyond the pain. New hopes lie in the colours of seasonal change, and as dreams swirl in winter’s bluster, know your heart will always be known to mine." This is so beautifully heart-warming Whisper's Caress ... truly an inspirational piece for your friend. Very much enjoyed these lovely sentiments! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I loved the way you referenced "pains" in your title and brought the relevance to it within your verse. Wonderful writing and full of deep emotion. The flow was very smooth and the moments were easily captured in your words. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Duncan, I like that this gave you comfort. Thanks so much for the reply. Naked, Thanks for the comment, i am glad you enjoyed it. Kit, Thanks, I appreciate the time to read and reply. Tracey, I thank you, glad you liked it. Mark, What can I say? Any praise from you is so appreciated. I am truly humbled when you are here. ever deep...runs |
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